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Vortex | 5 | 100.00% | |
Addlib | 0 | 0% | |
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05-31-03, 01:47 AM | #1 | |||||||
Jee-You Knit?
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Vortex (1-0) vs. Addlib (1-0)
IP: 5993 6822
Check in's by Monday
Verses by Tuesday Voting Ends Thursday Topic... Nothing to lose
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05-31-03, 07:43 AM | #2 | |||||||
-Merk Squad-
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IP: 9B91 D0C6
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05-31-03, 08:26 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 1B6B AD68
Nice Topic. .
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06-01-03, 01:19 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 6AD2 8F43
The Story Of Jason Rogers. .
Life on the street is hard, he'd love getting a Penny for his Thoughts but his only Window of Oppourtunity is the hole in his cardboard box. See, Jasons homeless. . his eyes red and his clothes are torn and Home Sweet Home is the cold floor of a shop porch. Once more he sits to ponder, how his life got so screwed in a constant state of: Heads - You Win, Tails - I Lose. Failure doomed his future, forced him to retreat to the streets He lost his mom to cancer and his job in the same week. now his brains weak from the drugs he's taking, but this should be excused, for He Has Nothing, therefore he Has Nothing to lose. . |
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06-03-03, 01:15 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 6AD2 8F43
Its Tuesday, 5.20pm where i live. .
Therefore you no show. Can i at least get some feedback on my verse? |
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06-04-03, 08:21 AM | #6 | ||||||||
-Merk Squad-
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IP: 072B 152E
yo vortex know's the score and i'm sorry i missed the deadline
But let's give him sum feedback on the vers Quote:
I thought tha beggining of the verse was a great opener And the verse was tight, it was true, had wordplay, was creative and had a good story, the structure was solid and tidy great stuff, i always enjoy your topical pieces -peace- |
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