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12-02-03, 09:47 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Da structure
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everyone always says sumtin bout my structure, i dont know if its me but am i doin sumtin wrong. or is it just da way yall battle around here?
sample: destroyin~my~foes, breakin~ya~bones from head~to~toe, ya cant heat up a battle so u "spit~shit~cold"/ ima spik havin better "rhymes" then flip~mode, ill take every stolen word from ya mouth and leave ya wit a "stripped~throat"/ my montrous rhymes are scarin ya-have ya runnin~out~ya~house, when dis nigga says hes "a hard nigga" it just means dat watchin black ppl leaves him "Seriously~aroused", da truth is killa class couldnt spit hot shit if he had diareha comin~out~da~mouth!!/ yall tell me wats wrong wit dat?
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12-02-03, 10:15 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 0D29 2657
structure is how your lines are done
this is how you do it when you rhyme and battle people and it is rearlly gay/ this is what it should look more like ya know?// |
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12-02-03, 10:15 PM | #3 | ||||||
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in other words ure lines are too long shorten them down and try to keep them all the same length
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12-03-03, 10:53 AM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 4112 F7C5
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ok, i guess i get it
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12-03-03, 02:21 PM | #5 | ||||||
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xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx good xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx bad simple as that youl find if you have abetter structure your flow improves aswell..cus youl match sylabls in lines |
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12-05-03, 03:10 PM | #6 | ||||||
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your structure is wack!
try to keep the number of syllables even and your bar lenghth also even tha'll make it easier to read ^^^like this Answered... CLOSED -Axe Last edited by Axe E. Um : 12-05-03 at 05:48 PM. |
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