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Old 10-03-04, 07:57 PM   #1
Scenario
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Complicated

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why is life so hard isn't anything easy
how hard is it for anything in this world to please me
females always say i'm a player, some call it sleezy
unstable right now with a shaky life, not even a gun would freeze me
it's just that hard struggling through life
i thought i paid my dues, but continue to still go through strife
ya done heard my story before, the same old horror movie
ya niggaz can take shots but u still can't bruise me *
i see tits while ya niggaz on a kid level still seeing boobies
i'm down with my girl now but still get offers from groupies
i type all my shit up, u won't see nothing on loose leaf
holding my temper back but wanting to kill these niggaz like bruce lee
scenario don't never trust a ho cause now i'm hot but the other day i was goofy
and not to mention they thought i was ugly
but now ho's be pushing they niggaz aside just to try and hug me
don't try to budge me
cause that 45. on ya waist won't even nudge me
even the littlest shit now starts to bug me
i don't know what is but niggaz always want beef dog
but half of them ain't on my level they still playing leap frog
and yea i'll admit i got a problem with the world cause i've lost alot
if my life had a price on it trust me that it would sure cost alot
only time most of these niggaz deal with heat is when they reach across a pot
and most of them probably done lost they spot
so they continue to hate cause i still floss alot
but i'm not conceided u could call it over confident
and i got pride but trust me none of ya niggaz is stomping it






*mistah tate took a shot at me in an open mic
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Old 10-03-04, 08:25 PM   #2
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uppin for feedback on this peeps
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Old 10-04-04, 05:33 AM   #3
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Old 10-04-04, 01:06 PM   #4
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Old 10-04-04, 01:09 PM   #5
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This was good,

Started good and ended good

Could have been a lil better but, nice use of words and shit

The boobies line was funny

Peace
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Old 10-04-04, 02:34 PM   #6
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nice man yer best probably ive heard man... 7.8/10 gettin better man keep it up check out my open mic when we meet the links in the sig aight ~1~
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Old 10-05-04, 11:04 PM   #7
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Look I Got a plot bright and bazaar
Switch on and off like spotlights on a car
See major behavior and Flow flavor so recognize
Best you all do me a favor oblige and correct your eyes
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Old 10-05-04, 11:34 PM   #8
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yo madrapper u aint gota rym evry response, um yo dis was a pretty solid piece dawg a 7.5/10, man you cuda gone harder though but u definatly got yo point across nice drop dawg n keep postin dat hot shit, hit my open mic up "cruelty" iite -1-
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Old 10-06-04, 02:10 PM   #9
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