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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
fgee | 3 | 50.00% | |
Phrantik | 3 | 50.00% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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06-14-03, 09:57 PM | #1 | |||||||
Jee-You Knit?
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fgee (3-0) vs. Phrantik (3-1)
IP: F75A 411A
Check In's are due MONDAY
Verses are due by TUESDAY Voting end's THURSDAY 16-48 lines long Topic... cover up
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06-15-03, 12:17 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
cover up......hmmmm.....should be interesting
checking into this match up.....hopefully some dope shit |
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06-16-03, 02:29 AM | #3 | ||||
Kevin Brown
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IP: 6FA7 7304
it would be dope, but your wack.
thanks for another easy win. hmm.. cover up? i already got an idea.
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06-16-03, 07:46 PM | #4 | ||||||
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fuck u faggot^^^^^
what the fucks your problem?....internet beef ..........lmao anyway i'll beat u 2moro |
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06-17-03, 02:06 AM | #5 | ||||
Kevin Brown
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IP: 6FA7 7304
i never brought i-net beed.
i stated i-net facts. quit while your ahead, i was the dopest topical champion on rb for a reason. prepare to lose.
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06-17-03, 04:12 PM | #6 | ||||
Kevin Brown
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IP: 6FA7 7304
post away kid.
i got a verse done. it will beat you. cause i am dope. and you are not, when you beat sand, somethin was wrong.. you wont be lucky again.
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06-17-03, 04:25 PM | #7 | ||||||
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lmao
ur a fukin herb....jus cos the belt didnt go your way....bet u been workin on a verse for the whole week..... i'm postin soon |
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06-17-03, 07:41 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
late autumn.....hunting trip.......
deep in a national park...... leaving the cabin the three of us set out for bears each hopin they could shoot a fur rug thru cross hairs idle banter floated in the pine filled air....as we set for higher ground cracking branches under foot....and birds emitting sound a tranquil morning rapidly passing with every bound....but still a long way to the hunting prime spot on a path with an unplanned plot....the perfect ending with one laser guided shot continuing on needle covered floors i almost forgot....i hadn't packed a sleeping bag! fuck.....now i had to return to base......what a drag we agreed to meet up again at the 'Stag'.....the place we always camp at parting ways to an unforeseen future that...would result in elemental combat amongst trees i glanced up at sky and it spat!....i had been lulled by the morning sunshine now the weather had turned clouds formed fronts above as my stomach churned....a strange sense possesed my body....a sign of a lesson to be learned i picked up my pace the weather was a major concern....step by step my clothes became wetter until i wore water the heavens lowered their stance tryin to confuse this walker....cold unrelenting powers capable of slaughter in my stupidity i had left warm clothes as well....now shivers flowed all over my soul taking a firm grip on nerves turning heat to cold....sucking the energy from me i felt ready to fold rain turned from sleet the sleet into snow....visibility so bad trees smacked into me without warning thoughts turned to my friends left behind this morning....i just hoped they were safe and not fighting a storm stalking stumbling into the flurry of flakes my eyes struggled with sight looking at my arm it was blue against white.....daylight left my head and turned to night i had to sit down or find shelter to rescue me from this plight....but futility overcame my will the drop in temperature was like a drill....hitting my torso to the core exposed parts numb from the chill nauseated from the exposure my mind flipped until....i slumped on the white carpet and passed out when i came to my eyes were crusted to the lids now....hands were useless attachments frozen throughout faint memories of boyhood....dam why didnt i got to scouts....a faint smile grimaced across my face i was helpless shackled by the blizzards embrace.....my back pack stuck to sweat unmovable from its place squirming i tried to move darting looks for the cabins grace....but blank sheets of snow blocked out my vision i felt deaths wrath start to make its incision....how the tables had turned....i was now my own prison consciousness faded back and forth with deaths permission....teasing me with its power an hour became minutes and minutes bacame seconds as it commenced to devour now i wish i had covered up idiocy my demise....i just wish life could hear my silent cries....... |
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06-17-03, 08:08 PM | #9 | ||||
Kevin Brown
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IP: 6FA7 7304
It’s the Easy, Breezy, Beautiful, Cover Girl
Hidden tears with paint Eyes drip with fear Her skins color is faint But you cant tell from near Shes ahead of the game Hides her real beauty Then she sleeps in shame And wants the world to see Every day is the same A new identity is born She walks the walk of fame But her talk is torn Screams and cries She can’t stand to be her Living life as lies Her heart wants to free her The brain and the soul Both cant agree She wants to fall in a hole And never be free Allow her to change Strip the costume all down She cant stand to be strange She cant hide her frown Unhealthy living cant hide She exposes the her real look Shes learning to survive Judged the title of the book But now I can see The eyes of this pup Her soul has been set free No need to cover up
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06-18-03, 01:27 PM | #10 | ||||||
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dam sleepers
uppin this shit.............................................. ... ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllllllllllllllll |
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06-18-03, 02:54 PM | #11 | ||||
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ok , i liked fgee's verse, but it was too crazy of a reading set up, didnt get all the rhyme scheme, multies, or any of that shit
where as phrantik had a nice verse with an... abab set up... that was easy to see,, verse quality goes to phrantik... complexity goes to fgee... <--- he had the complexity, but complexity is nothing without quality Vote: Phrantik |
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06-18-03, 05:05 PM | #12 | ||||
Kevin Brown
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IP: 6FA7 7304
1-0... for me.
i hate to say i told you so but i told you so. uppin. for some more votes.......
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06-18-03, 06:34 PM | #13 | |||||||
BANNED For Being A Dick
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Phrantix, Yours Was Very Easy To Read, Simple, And Understandable...
fgee Had Multis, And Maybe A More Urgency To His Topic...I Say Fgee Took It Though, His Multis WERE Alot More Complicated, And In the Same Way Better, Than Phrantix...Phranix I Know What You Were Trying To Do But It Came Out TOO Simple Vote=fgee |
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06-18-03, 06:42 PM | #14 | ||||||
i eat..eat..eat..emcees
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Phrantiks Verse Wuz Simple.....Easy To Read For Children...Although It Had A Good Story To IT.....Fgee's On The Other Hand I Followed.....He Used Nice Wordplay Also.......I Feel As Though He Grasped The Concept Better Than Tik....And For Future References This Isn't A Hate Vote So I'm Not Hearin That....Vote=Fgee
(but sometimes u should think before u speak)
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06-18-03, 06:43 PM | #15 | ||||||
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ha ha
eat your fukin words Tik finally someone has seen the light......... keep em coming it's 1-1 |
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