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u spit first

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my premonition* is for you to STOP, drop and roll real quick//
before i lite that fire on your azz like irritated 'roids** when you shit//
to spit at you is not worth my time I'd rather nib*** on your sister's clit//
or smack your mami's azz from the back while I chew on her tit//
You're insane, to wanna battle, I should call 9-1-1//
have you nothing to say? Are you speachless? or is your mouth full of my cum?//
You're a Kinkos kinda rapper, who portrays a thug...do you hear laughter?//
if copied lyrics were what I'm after, I'll logon and listen to Napster//
I'm done, and you are finished, throw in the towel before you begin//
Since Biggie Smalls**** won't be using them, I bet he has some lyrics to lend//


*premonition = fortelling the future
** 'roids = hemmroids
*** nib = nibble
**** Biggie Smalls = he's dead, so he has lyrics to spare

4 barz to merk this kid...listen...

ur jus a heartless bitch...so ya chest im bustin through...
like a pair of cheap snickers...don't take care because ya new...(newb)
choke ya on ya pride...i'll make ya swallow ya profile....
explaining ya punches?..j must think rb is dosile...
u playin scrabble wiv ya gram n sayin that you got wordplay...
bitch you've been a 'herb' so long..i cud use u as an ashtray...
ya mums a slut...preganant weekly n neva takes precautions...
n all that crack means ya brothers n sisters all av natural abortions....


uppin

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uppin for votes...c'mon ya'll!!!!! I need some nput on this battle.

votes....votes...votes...where the votes at.......

Premanition better verse. i understood your verse. nice personals and punches. jsmoove you did good too but your structure was weak.

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

1-0 uppin this.............................................. ......................................../.

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uppin............................................. ......

I'm uppin this one for more votes...ones not gonna do it!

Premanition, I think your punches were harder. Good flow as well
JSmoove: Not bad, but I think your lines were a bit too 'common'. I've seen you do much better! keep it up

Vote: Premanition

No Wonder ur a Free agent na lemmie stop dat shit was iight nigga ull get better

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Free Agent

pre got this he came way better than dude mean completely better
he was whack. pre won punches,flow and he had better disses. jay
crackin on moms is playedand so is sister your neva goin 2 win
sayin shit like dat.

Votere

thanks for comin out to the both of you, good fight good fight. but here's the verdict.

JSmoothe-nice personal at the beginning, good way to start off a verse is with a play off the name personal. Kept me listening, especially how the first line connects itself with the next. "Stop drop and roll quick...." and then it mentioning the burning feeling of hemorroids, that's nice. decent flow, not bad not excellent, not flawed. It was a decent battle verse and i can tell that you thought that, "Hey, this guy doesn't have much on me, so i don't need to bring ether on him to beat him."

or did you?

premanition-(nice name by the way) i like the swagger you came with. "Only 4 barz to merk this kid." I was like, aight aight, let's see it. And that's what's great, is to begin with a swagger that makes people want to listen, and wait in anticipation for illness. Your verse in itself came off the same as your opponents did, "I don't need to spit that hard to beat this dude." The problem herein is that you left me dissatisfied for all the attention i was about to pay your verse. The combination of what i beleive to be an ill name, and as well as a no-pressure aura about yourself, gave me high hopes. Perhaps higher than they should've been. you came in kind of weak, i have to admit. but this line i like, "u playin scrabble wiv ya gram n sayin that you got wordplay..."

that's hot. and the way you ended it was quite nice, props on that.


ya mums a slut...preganant weekly n neva takes precautions...
n all that crack means ya brothers n sisters all av natural abortions....

a good ender definately made up for the beginning let down.
however i think that overall, Jsmooth got over you. He had more illness and content in his verse than you did. But overall it was a decent exhibition and i'd like to see more from you guys.

vote=jsmooth

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^^^i left u dis-satisfied but i still merkied him, not convincingly but i didnt need to...well woteva dawg i respect ya vote but don't realy get it...lol...pz

uppin!

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