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11-28-05, 01:55 AM
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Miss Me?
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53. Past Tense vs 54. SlicKnife
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11-28-05, 02:26 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP:
checkin in the muh fucka
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11-28-05, 11:45 AM
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#3
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Middle Weight
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IP:
Check in....
I have two punches, will choose one when time comes |
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11-28-05, 03:20 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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im gonna "turn u off to beefin" like "converting u to a vegetarian"
till you start "wetting urself" like "automatic filling aquariums" ha somthing quick |
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11-28-05, 03:32 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP:
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11-28-05, 03:36 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP:
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11-28-05, 07:37 PM
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#7
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Bone is gay.
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Stupid you aint really gotta post them you can just leave them gone ...
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11-29-05, 04:10 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP:
While Slic is being spoken of in the Rap Mags n Sites, without fame seeking as well//
You might JUST be lucky enough to be talked of in the…let your NAME speak for itself…! (Past Tense) If you don't understand it, don't vote... |
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11-29-05, 04:20 PM
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP:
im gonna "turn u off to beefin" like "converting u to a vegetarian"
till you start "wetting urself" like "automatic filling aquariums" ^set was really played...and the punch could have been better.Seems like you rushed this IMO. While Slic is being spoken of in the Rap Mags n Sites, without fame seeking as well// You might JUST be lucky enough to be talked of in the…let your NAME speak for itself…! ^Stretched out,decent concept for a punch,worded bad...and Your style also seems awfully familar to fruad/icy-hot as well.. v/Past tense |
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11-29-05, 06:26 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP:
v/past tense, even if it was played, it was better
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speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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11-29-05, 07:51 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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11-29-05, 08:38 PM
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I Hurt.
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IP:
Uh, I didn't like either. Slic's was creative, but corny. Past Tense had the concept, but stretched. Word of advice to ya, read ya punch outloud and see it flows before ya post it. I think it was better tho despite the wordiness.
Vote - Past Tense |
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11-30-05, 12:30 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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11-30-05, 09:26 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP:
What the fuck
Can we get some more votes in on this... |
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11-30-05, 11:04 AM
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Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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IP:
v/ past-tense only cos the punch had a bit more meaning and was a little funnier.
Slick's was a little stretched it had good wordplay but needed to be worded better. Sorry bro
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