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02-02-05, 01:11 AM
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Life is a Constant Battle
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Apocolypse topical.(lots of peeps liked so here it is)
IP: 404C 71FB
yo thanx for the props give me some more feedback i was told this was a dope piece then that it was the best topical piece someones ever heard...
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Earth is quiet, beauty is silent, matter of man violent army is defiant, osama is tyrant, batter of man giant usa went to war sounds of bombs filled terrorism sore Bush commended then riddiculed for performance war Korea blew up chemical attack by terrorist who blew up thought it was us n enemies shot up fallout who glow up Apocolypse Buttons were pressed, millions were lost, mushroom cloud dust Korea was stressed, shot missle as test, hit china billion bust russia next messed, neighbor acid blest, india's turn nuke game o chess nation left crest, of missiles in terror vest, anthrax dropped shame n mess my legs are shaken, people are beacon, deaths toll not done taken cancer lives taken, pyro hemisphere waken, air is biological quaken cant shuffle thoughts, ace of spade thoughts, skin off like rust cant muffle coughs, priest gave funeral blocks, survival a must devils no love no lust, plagued dueteral flocks, revival set bust My tears enrich soil, deep i depress n boil, cancer blest to toil start was over oil, black gold killed homo, life set back in koil why heaven let it go down, why wasnt peace and bliss found why grim reap sis to ground, why devil kleave and shit round end of earth, crust pealed showin poisoned fruit and all in dirt judgement day came and went no shelter except government starvation, vibration, malnutrition, no vision earth cries radiation magnation, plaguenation, oni set tone cover bodies sedimentation blood and land flow in cement, death grips souls traped in torment emotion desolate non content, poetry spits end to happy lambnent i have two contractions of lung left and no easy way out wit meth i held the frozen baby as he smiled to death and i fell over context epidermal flexed and acid rain cleaned my chest, blood n poison mixt no more pain, no more suffer, i feel last strain n think of my lover she died tame, before canibal buffer and innocent sent styx water cough, cough, i bleed seein life before my eyes cough, cough, i wish someone silence the crys *heart contracts, lungs cave, eyes roll, luckey no one disturbed this mans grave* hope yall liked it been ellivatin...ever want collabo pm me...now post some feed 
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02-02-05, 01:18 AM
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Life is a Constant Battle
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IP: 404C 71FB
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02-02-05, 11:20 AM
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Life is a Constant Battle
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IP: 829B 8DB6
uppin yo i know you seen it in ingenius but still gotta holla
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02-02-05, 12:46 PM
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Middle Weight
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dis was good overall,u need to up on da vocab a bit...good structure,wellbalance; hmmmmmm nice usuage of multies n wat not....good read tho keep it up.....7.5/10
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02-02-05, 02:22 PM
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Life is a Constant Battle
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IP: 38FA A79F
uppin............................................. ...............
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02-05-05, 01:57 AM
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Life is a Constant Battle
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IP: 2430 2BA8
uppin for the people......................................
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02-05-05, 02:00 AM
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Yeah,This Account = Alias
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IP: 3240 794D
yo i already told you dis shit was hot..and it still is hot...goos shit fam..hope to see alot more dope shit from you since we in da same crew..werd ~1~
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04-07-05, 08:57 PM
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Tight.
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IP: 1768 36E3
This isn't really an open mic, technically this style of writing is spoken word.
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