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08-16-05, 09:28 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Some Truth
IP: CF74 5D3A
Some Truth
Like a student adapt to school and rap cool, trap fools With textbook take a complex look at my map tools Roads of education loads of information to be shared Wear bling tight but need wings in flight to success dared To be famous, like foreign aid contribute to the rise Of economics by rapping wise Ebonics that’ll surprise The public recognize the subject of rap being disguised Taste steak and waste great flavor on my plate meat too tough Can’t eat this stuff need to reheat on grill for Labor Day it scuffed My boots, got ocean of scriptures like motion pictures some Are short stories all sorts of glories in rhyme sweet like Rum Learning to add and subtract I’ll be a bad thug whack without Math skills life’s path ill and wrath fills roadways no doubt |
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08-16-05, 09:33 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
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08-16-05, 10:26 AM | #3 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: E3EC B040
Short but nice piece
I wish it was a bit longer though, I would've loved to read more about this! The concept was good, like the title said: just spitting some truth. The vocab was on point and the flow was really good. You had good internal rhyming, nicely multis and such. Keep it up!
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08-16-05, 12:46 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
Thanks Drama Queen For Real Don't Get Many Props
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