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02-02-04, 04:10 PM
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Baz187 Vs Tenz
IP: 659B AFC6
Check in dawg
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02-02-04, 04:16 PM
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IP: 19B2 08D6
Shit......
I push you up like a facelift Face it, you aint never come close to me The end is near i can almost taste it Let my gat loose to spill ya brains on the pavement Now thats a 187, baz they should call you 9 eleven for Emergancy, your in danger of losin this battle To dawg like me.................. Im misunderstud, but fuck it My rhyme is almost up Up in your ass so fast it cant even give you time to answer back I got more plenty beef from vannesa felts ass crack Than 10 of your dis's, man where you at!!!! |
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02-02-04, 04:30 PM
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IP: 659B AFC6
Dawg am here ... lets go ......yo.........
Dawg that verse was whack, You talkin about facelifts tat, or are u talkin from your ass crack, You definatley whack, like vanessa on slim fast, wouldn' last, as hungry as me ,when i face another mc, Im the Pimp you my bitch, i know your starting to twitch, time to face facts, u need a new career, those weak rhymes are to fake to hear, take your pre written shit n go back to the lab, goin toe-to-toe with me, nigga i'll call u a cab. |
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02-02-04, 04:33 PM
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IP: 659B AFC6
Go n face Daffer22, whup his ass
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02-02-04, 04:40 PM
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IP: 659B AFC6
That was a hot flow dawg i couldn't flip it
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02-02-04, 04:56 PM
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IP: 659B AFC6
Lets Try this again, n i won't be kind,
this ones better, like your mum, i'll whup you behind, I'll count to ten dawg, n blow ur flame out, you call nine eleven now, ur ryhmes ain't nowt, you jus jealous of my flow or should i say smitten, tenz dawg, i know all of your flows are written, vanilla ice spill the beans and rice, this battles done, lets roll the dice, you a one, im'a six, now its really time to spit, now im sick of dissin you, n your bow wow shit, you aint got no AK, so u ain't shoot nuthin, now its about time u stop frontin.... |
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02-02-04, 05:02 PM
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IP: 19B2 08D6
Now lets not beat around the bush
Cuz Y'all know that Baz 187 is just an internet thug Actin ruff, But when it boils down to it You'll be quite on the hush Dont push me dawg, Cuz i aint finished I aint even started I'll break you down peice by piece Cuz 'nigga' you retarded And what now..... You a pimp, or is it gangsta Thats all there is these days Are these imatating pranksters Didn't you ear 50 Well just for the record we'll call you the wanksta |
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02-02-04, 05:08 PM
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IP: 3722 962C
i cant vote but your verses both need some pointers..
firts off both of u came with some played out bars..and tenz, shootin people lines are the weakest thngs u could drop..u guys need to add some vocab, punches(definatly), some sort of rhyme scheme(flow) and structure. cuz ur verses were both pretty weak. u guys need to try and be more creative in fabricating orginal punches,etc.. i'm not tryin to diss u guys, just tryin 2 help u both improve..elevate |
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02-02-04, 05:11 PM
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IP: EB27 E87F
Here's how I see this.
Flow=Tie. Neither of your flows were well structured, which made them hard to read. I'm not even going to comment on the 2nd flow by Baz. Both of your flows were kind of messed up, work on this and it will make your over all drop better. Punches=Tie again. You both had about the same number of punches and they both hit about as hard, which wasn't much. Both of you need to work on this as well, a good punch can win you a battle. Personals=Tenz, I'm giving this to him because I didn't really see any personals from Baz until his second drop which doesn't count. Once again, both of you work on this and it will really improve your drops. Vocab=Tie again. Both of you used pretty basic vocab, a few well chosen pieces of vocab can really make any drop better. Again work on that and it should help both of you elevate. Ove all=Tenz, your piece hit a little bit harder, you still need to get to work on your flow and developing your punches and personals and vocab, if you can do this I think you will improve greatly. Baz, you need to work on all of that stuff as well, but also realize that most of the people on this site think feeding off of the other persons verse is bitch to do, come up with stuff from your own brain and it will be a much better piece, other than that just keep working on other stuff, your second drop had a much better flow and I probably would have given you the win off of that but it was dropped to late. Vote=Tenz |
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