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Spektikul 5 100.00%
RobKilla 0 0%
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Old 06-05-05, 09:33 AM   #1
.TeamOne.
RobKilla
 
Spektikul vs RobKilla

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No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

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Old 06-05-05, 11:16 AM   #2
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Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 11:16 AM.
 
Old 06-05-05, 11:16 AM   #3
Spektikul
The Original Half Ass King
 
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From: Canada
IP: 7C6D 1B8D

Fuckin herbs...half-assed key to show this kid how I do...

Who does this kid think he is, bitch you can sit on this finger...
Rob says hes a killa, but even his avy cant pull the trigger
This wiggers just pussy, how you supposed to leave me dead
He'd only be harmful, bringing a needle into this thread
Scared to show hes an herb, his records at eleven and one
First vet that he battled, was the first time he got sonned
Will this kid drop us a verse, Ill be surprised to be honest
Cause hes only got 500 posts...and been here since Augest
You leave everyone yawning, cause your the sillyest whore
Spek just flipped you, now we know Rob is really a Bor (bore)


Explanations
(For some of yall dumbasses)

Bar 1 = Look at his avy (self-explainitory)
Bar 2 = Needle+Thread (Battle thread)
Bar 3 = Lost to Hotshh! and lost (first vet he battled aka first loss)
Bar 4 = He prolly wont show (Inactivity/herb)
Bar 5 = Flipped+Rob (Bore aka Bor) hense the yawning line

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Old 06-08-05, 06:08 AM   #4
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Old 06-08-05, 06:21 AM   #5
.TeamOne.
RobKilla
 
IP: CFA1 529B

his occupation's beatin "city pussy," whats the word with that
his rec's hyped up from killin newbs, he only deals wit HERBin cats (urban cats)
wanna be a spektikul on RV when you know we all hate you
and to acheive this, you come one K short of a hate group
you couldn't catch up to my cash flow if we crossed earnings
cuz beatin me is like catchin the holy ghost at one of your cross burnings
this kid's half my stature, yet the fight goes on?
he worth only more than a Spek... why you think he writes so small
you might get trumped or straight flushed if you fuckin wit this
ya style's like ya member title in poker games... it doesnt exist

here:
-urban cats(herbin cats)= city pussy
-his member title is "one of a kind"
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Old 06-08-05, 01:27 PM   #6
Elementality
 
This was feedback posted for Spektikul

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Opener - Spek > made me laff/ good personl
Closer - Rob > pretty gid
Punches - Spek had better left hookz
Personals - Spek hit deep
Metas - closest was the "sillyest whore" > But i dont think that qualifies so >none.
Multies - Dint c any
Vocab - Tie
Structure - Spex was tighter obviously
Comedy - Got more chukls from spex, I think this ones fairly ovious.

V/ Spek
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Old 06-08-05, 08:22 PM   #7
.TeamOne.
RobKilla
 
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uppin this shyt... if u wanted to vote... then tell strobe in tha emergency battle forum thingie... i dont know if its well explained tho...
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Old 06-08-05, 08:46 PM   #8
kelsick39
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From: Illstate
This was feedback posted for RobKilla

IP: 3B27 2020

polll checkin.......... u won.....last two bars= fiya
 
Old 06-08-05, 10:16 PM   #9
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leave you rest'n pz's
 
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Voted For: Spektikul

Who does this kid think he is, bitch you can sit on this finger...
Rob says hes a killa, but even his avy cant pull the trigger
^^decent opener/name play
This wiggers just pussy, how you supposed to leave me dead
He'd only be harmful, bringing a needle into this thread
^^better, basic thou
Scared to show hes an herb, his records at eleven and one
First vet that he battled, was the first time he got sonned
^^lol,.nice personal
Will this kid drop us a verse, Ill be surprised to be honest
Cause hes only got 500 posts...and been here since Augest
^^eh, got it but on the weaker side
You leave everyone yawning, cause your the sillyest whore
Spek just flipped you, now we know Rob is really a Bor (bore)
^^that had ohh factor, nice bar spek
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overall opener n closer were nice only one line i wasnt feelin
pretty consistent verse, a little basic in areas but you
picked it up late-on...
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his occupation's beatin "city pussy," whats the word with that
his rec's hyped up from killin newbs, he only deals wit HERBin cats (urban cats)
^^nice opener
wanna be a spektikul on RV when you know we all hate you
and to acheive this, you come one K short of a hate group
^^nice nameplay
you couldn't catch up to my cash flow if we crossed earnings
cuz beatin me is like catchin the holy ghost at one of your cross burnings
^^nah, dont play off your own bar..diss him
this kid's half my stature, yet the fight goes on?
he worth only more than a Spek... why you think he writes so small
^^woulda been dope had he
you might get trumped or straight flushed if you fuckin wit this
ya style's like ya member title in poker games... it doesnt exist
^^decent....
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overall you almost matched spek bar for bar/personal for personal,but his opener/3rd bar n closer were a tad bit
better, this was damn close thou..
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rob n spek this is an honest vote, im no d/r
but if you feel its not a good vote, just delete it....
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no hate,great personal battle, props rob, youve elevated alot
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 06-09-05, 12:46 AM   #10
Adam
 
From: Canada
This was feedback posted for Spektikul

IP: A0C8 44A9

Polls.............................................
 
Old 06-09-05, 11:23 AM   #11
Spektikul
The Original Half Ass King
 
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From: Canada
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lmao...

I didnt even try in this..........
 
Old 06-11-05, 10:49 AM   #12
Daubs
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From: Salford
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Voted For: Spektikul

Ok

Both came just average in my eyes with punches, no proper wordplay.

Speks structure was better in my opinion and what i think got him this battle was his use of personals throughout. Personals and punches win battles so thats what got him the win here.

Rob your Bars ryhed and you did have personals, but no hard hitting punches in my opinion... no hate to you but in the future use more creative wordplay and better punches.

Spek RTF so i dont need to DQ this vote!! you have 3 days.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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Old 06-16-05, 08:14 AM   #13
BiZzO
Ka.Nek.ShuN
 
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IP: 7F23 8EDF

Voted For: Spektikul

iight this was a pretty weak battle for killa.. as usual even with a key spek u came hard.. lets go into a bit of detail shall we?

spek - your verse was pretty sick, flowed realli well, easy to read the whole way through, that can make or break a verse, your punches hit hard and often, where as robs were weak and skatterd, your personals were coo and your vocab has a good range so thats tite, structure was flawless and u had some funny shit in there.. good verse.. pretty dope 8.5/10

rob - you got nothin on spek, he proved it just keyin you, your verse was to genralised, vocab needs to be extended, punches need to be directed more and more consistant, need to work on some more personals and get ur structure workin a bit more, also your flow was a bit off like i said that by itself can turn a match... elevate.. not bad 6.5/10

overall skep u got this one homie.. no hate just how i saw it comphrehensive win.. check ur pm yo..
 
Old 06-16-05, 06:27 PM   #14
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
From: Chitown
This was feedback posted for RobKilla

IP: 3B27 2020

checccccccccccckin polllllllllsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sss
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Old 06-16-05, 06:48 PM   #15
.TeamOne.
RobKilla
 
IP: BD94 519A

Quote:
Originally Posted by Murdz
Voted For: Spektikul

iight this was a pretty weak battle for killa.. as usual even with a key spek u came hard.. lets go into a bit of detail shall we?

spek - your verse was pretty sick, flowed realli well, easy to read the whole way through, that can make or break a verse, your punches hit hard and often, where as robs were weak and skatterd, your personals were coo and your vocab has a good range so thats tite, structure was flawless and u had some funny shit in there.. good verse.. pretty dope 8.5/10

rob - you got nothin on spek, he proved it just keyin you, your verse was to genralised, vocab needs to be extended, punches need to be directed more and more consistant, need to work on some more personals and get ur structure workin a bit more, also your flow was a bit off like i said that by itself can turn a match... elevate.. not bad 6.5/10

overall skep u got this one homie.. no hate just how i saw it comphrehensive win.. check ur pm yo..

dayum... if this isnt DR then i dont know what is
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