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10-27-04, 12:05 AM | #1 | |||||||
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First OM........Devils tears...... must read
IP: 0825 899A
From the moment they saw eachother it was Love at first sight had Dreams of eternal happiness with no worries or fights lived right outside of town, the little house with the picket fence surrounded by beautiful flowers that gave the home a wonderful scent had two lovely children whose ages varied from seven to three they had the perfect life and perfect home with a swing in the tree The seven year old got straight 'A's and didn't get into trouble at all and the three year old was the perfect todler, winter through fall 5 years goes by and the family is still very pefect to the tee kids are still wonderful and the swing still hangs from the tree for the children and father life is still extremely happy and perfect little do they know their stay at home mom is feeling unhappy and worthless one day as she looks in the mirrior, down her cheek rolls a tear and she stares at this unhappy face filled wit tremendous pain and fear she says its time to go and throws the rat poison down her throat lights and takes a drag from the first and last cigarette she ever smoked she sits on her bed and writes a letter to her husband as she slowly dies father and children come home to there biggest fear and endless cries and her tragic death is the end to this story book family's perfect life and we find out that some things can even bring 'Tears' to the 'Devils' eyes |
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10-27-04, 12:55 AM | #2 | |||||
SEE YA AT THE TOP
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IP: 1EDC 673C
mice peice man, sentimentl stuff/
get at mine oh yeah, 8/10, i can relate
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10-27-04, 02:58 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
thanx for the feed dawg lets keep it comin........
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10-27-04, 10:16 AM | #4 | |||||||
***cITYSLICka***
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IP: 6CEA 0327
good piece. i liked the twist to the story.keep em' comin'.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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