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Check in by: 07-28-05 at 04:04 PM

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Spoken Word has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-05 03:47 PM.

Aiight...Check It....


I'll smack this geek, His only two talents are whack and weak
Lighting a suitcase on fire is the only time youre packing heat
So if youre smart, You'll beat it, Edit your verse and delete it
Youre probably reading that, Nodding ya head and agreeing
Im gonna dig up your grave, So i can easily collect your bones
And leave ya with no chance to talk, Like disconnected phones
Stop lickin the cock dude, You think youre tight, But I'll rock you
Cause your just a bitch underneath, Like a chick in a costume
So first Im'a target your torso, With at least a hundred hits
Denmark ya face, Cuz you dont know what Europe against
Shit bone, My skills are killer, And im making you fear that
By punching you in the forehead and makin your ears clap


Upping for you...

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BoneCollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-05 03:54 PM.

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Voted For: BoneCollector

urs was better cuz it floed better and had some aight lyrics..more lulties..wasted that newbie

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Voted For: Spoken Word

They was both good but I have to make this a win to Spoken.

I'll smack this geek, His only two talents are whack and weak
Lighting a suitcase on fire is the only time youre packing heat
^^^ i like that opener...then....

So if youre smart, You'll beat it, Edit your verse and delete it
That was another good one to follow up the opener

I didn't really like the final two lines but the top to middle was good.

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Voted For: BoneCollector

This was a pretty weak battle but to me Bone came better..he had some funny punchlines..some nice personals...and some okay meta's ..and multies.. As for spoken you also had some nice punchlines but they werent hitten as hard as bones..and you really didnt have many personals that were hitten very hard..you had a decent verse ..but i feel that Bc came alittle better..and took this battle by alittle

Overall vote: BoneCollector
No hate

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Voted For: BoneCollector

You a Livin Legend.. But bitch you aint got one win under your belt?
Ill put my nut sack in ya hand.....and my flow still couldnt be felt...!
^^^whack and set-ip terribly
I go spoken ..'ina state of mind'..that he doesnt know what to do..
Cus when you set up this battle without me known'n..i said who are you?
^^^OK...............
New to rv..and you think you can take on one of the oldest vets..
Cus ill put shots in ya dawg..and i aint talking about ya household pets..
^^^OK.............
So now think hard was this really a good idea for me to battle Bc..
Cus this nucca's gon give you alose..and watch All of Rv agree..
^^^^You a lil basic......
That your just another wack emcee...tryin to get fame by battling me..
So go home and plee..or god please..dont let me lose!..I'll go down to 1 knee..
^^^^NO.,............
And you call yourself a rap veteran..when you aint gon win this?
I can half assed...and Spoken words who?I dont think he exist..!
^^^same concept as the line earlier

You set-up your punches terribly.Where are your clever wordplay and metas?You had 2 lines based on the same concept on nobody knowing him.Whack.Very boring verse too.AT the end you say it's some weak shit.Well if it's weak don't glorify yourself.

I'll smack this geek, His only two talents are whack and weak
Lighting a suitcase on fire is the only time youre packing heat
^^^Played...........
So if youre smart, You'll beat it, Edit your verse and delete it
Youre probably reading that, Nodding ya head and agreeing
^^^Punch???where is it...........
Im gonna dig up your grave, So i can easily collect your bones
And leave ya with no chance to talk, Like disconnected phones
^^played
Stop lickin the cock dude, You think youre tight, But I'll rock you
Cause your just a bitch underneath, Like a chick in a costume
^^1st line elementary....2nd line was good
So first Im'a target your torso, With at least a hundred hits
Denmark ya face, Cuz you dont know what Europe against
^^^Punch!!!!....WHERE?!?!?!?
Shit bone, My skills are killer, And im making you fear that
By punching you in the forehead and makin your ears clap
^^^PUNCH!!!WHERE?!?!?!?

OMG.This battle sucked so damn bad.Your problem was not having any good punches.Ur shit was either played,not a punch,or just flat out bullshit.SO lemme see.
Bone Collector's selfglorifing/basic/boring ass verse
vs
Your played/bars with no punches/weak verse'

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yup u won...............................................

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re~verb vs legion (topical)
re~verb vs shard (text)

See what i dont understand about RV is how can these people vote like this. The first 2 should get deleted, those werent votes, probably didnt even read the verses, cuz i know mine flowed better and BC knows mine does too.


And then my denmark europe line was creative, but i guess RV is all about nonsense lines and idiots who cant understand a line if its not wrote to their satisfaction.

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Voted For: Spoken Word

wow... Bone u came really weak...sex and guns are used so much its really irrelevent dude, and saying he dont exist twice is a lil boring too. Spoken u had some funny punches that hit hard good stuff but v/Spoken for harder punches and a better flow in my opinion

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Me vs. Opt1k(topical..50/vote)
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Voted For: BoneCollector

i think bonecolletor had betta punches
both flows were good
bone had betta wordplay
and also bones structure was better

so ma vote go to BoneCollector

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