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KhAoZ ThEoRy 2 28.57%
Daubs 5 71.43%
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Old 05-30-05, 12:07 PM   #1
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From: Salford
Daubs vs KhAoZ ThEoRy

IP: 828D 0B7A

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Recycling
No Biting
Crew votes are allowed, we in the same crew.

No hate, good luck fam.

Minimum posts to vote: 100

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Old 05-30-05, 12:14 PM   #2
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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-30-05 12:14 PM.
 
Old 05-30-05, 12:19 PM   #3
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KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-30-05 12:19 PM.
 
Old 05-30-05, 12:19 PM   #4
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Puncture your lungs like a board with a dart....
Blowjob before the battle?
Thats the only way you gonna have a head start!!

This fools a coin so ima leave this hoe spun...
Skippin over gats?
Just proves to us.......that you jump the gun!!

Not been KO'ed? Well ima have to make the first..
If ya girl was a sphere..
You still wouldn't manage to get a "round herr"!!


1 should get it..
2 jump the gun = is a cheat
3 llocation says "round herrrre"

if you dont get the punches and wordplay, Pm me or dont vote !!!!!

yea was quick, good luck
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Old 05-30-05, 12:24 PM   #5
MyNamesGrafhYall
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''UK Stand Up''...Be Counted, & Get Yo ''Arse'' Slain By Da Minority!
U Culd Have Cartman Reppin England & Nobodiez ''Respectin Yo Authority''
Sorry-Bee, Yo Rhymez R ''Evicted'' U Can Now Go Home
It Aint Only Winz We Stealin Frum U, Itz Ya PHONE!!**
Hand Daubs A ''Bone'' Diz Dawg Choked & Forgot 2 Chew
Dat Diss 2 TBN, U Wuz Lame...
Gave Uz A Bad Name, Cuz U Came Whacker Than They Krew!


**=In My Mugshots Thread, We Wuz Talkin Bout My Cellphone An He Said He Had Hiz Phone Stolen lol

Sorry Bout Da Carry On Line Daubs, Count It Az 1 bar
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Old 05-30-05, 12:26 PM   #6
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hahahaha... good shit, and yeah i have that structure sometimes too....

good luck...upppppppp....
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Old 05-30-05, 12:31 PM   #7
MyNamesGrafhYall
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Haha U Had Dope Shit 2 Dawg, Shuld Be A Real Close Battle, Proppz Goez Out 2 U & Now U Know Y I Say U Shuld Be Co-Leader, I Murderd Casper Literally Wid Rhymez, U Are Mo Ov'a Challenge Datz 4sho Dawgy, Good Luck In Diz!
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Old 05-30-05, 12:32 PM   #8
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ite good lookin...cas fam too hough, get me....

good luck.
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Old 05-30-05, 03:44 PM   #9
Ryan Hughes
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

V/Khaoz theory...this was a good battle....khaoz came wit some hot punchs that were creative an had some personals structure was good....daubs....ur verse was ight u had ight structure but ur punchs weren't hitting hard to me i felt that u came to lightly in this one.....No hate.....RETURN THE FAOVR(or i will get this vote removed)..http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=189169
^^^^^.........
Opener=K
Closer=K
Structure=K
Punchs=k
multi's=Tie none really
personals=K
Wordplay=k
vocab=tie
Overall=Khaoz Theory
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Old 05-30-05, 04:24 PM   #10
Germ
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From: Adanac
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Voted For: Daubs

daubs got this one, he was way more consistent with his disses, well only 3 bars, but he stayed consistent, and thats what you gotta do with a short battle like this, khaoz, your second bar was totally weak and shitless.......because who really cares if his phone was stolen, its a weak meta man.....hurt ya verse alot...and your closer was stretched and worded horribly.....but you got decent concepts, keep up fo-sho..daubs stayed pretty strong throught, nothing too special here.....i kinda chuckles at daubs' closer though, word......so daubs got this easily.....good show both

v/daubs
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Old 05-30-05, 04:30 PM   #11
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ok thanks man.. uppin.............................
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Old 05-30-05, 08:04 PM   #12
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Old 05-30-05, 08:09 PM   #13
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Voted For: Daubs

daubs came stronger here good punches hit on point good flow and your structure was perfect on this diff but dope wordplay was good and opener and closer went well
kaos-first off u hated which is stated there is none of in tha rules....other than that flow was good came strong at tha end but weak at tha start structure was ok and wordplay was good just felt daubs punches landed better on ev ery bar
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Old 05-31-05, 07:22 AM   #14
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Old 05-31-05, 09:37 AM   #15
MaRVJay
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Voted For: Daubs

daubs:
Puncture your lungs like a board with a dart....
Blowjob before the battle?
Thats the only way you gonna have a head start!!
^^^DECENT OPENER...ITS NOT PLAYED BUT IJUST THINK HEAD BARS R OLD NOW..
This fools a coin so ima leave this hoe spun...
Skippin over gats?
Just proves to us.......that you jump the gun!!
^^^UHH OKAY PUNCH

Not been KO'ed? Well ima have to make the first..
If ya girl was a sphere..
You still wouldn't manage to get a "round herr"!!
^^^FIRST & HERR...DONT RYHME I KNOW U PROBLY SPEAK WITH A ACCENT BUT DIS DONT RYHME 4REAL



khaoz:
''UK Stand Up''...Be Counted, & Get Yo ''Arse'' Slain By Da Minority!
U Culd Have Cartman Reppin England & Nobodiez ''Respectin Yo Authority''
^^^VERY WEAK OPENER
Sorry-Bee, Yo Rhymez R ''Evicted'' U Can Now Go Home
It Aint Only Winz We Stealin Frum U, Itz Ya PHONE!!**
^^EVEN THO IT WAS A PERSONAL...I REALLY DIDN'T LIKE DIS
Hand Daubs A ''Bone'' Diz Dawg Choked & Forgot 2 Chew
Dat Diss 2 TBN, U Wuz Lame...
Gave Uz A Bad Name, Cuz U Came Whacker Than They Krew!
^^^BEST LINE IN YA VERSE..

V/DAUBS...EVEN THO HE AINT HAVE NO PERSONALS I THINK HE HAD MORE CREATIVITY....WHICH KHAOZ REALLY DIDN'T HAVE NUN OF YA BARS STOOD OUT

RETURN DA FAVOR....
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