10 2 15 lines..
u spit first..
check in when u bouta spit...

here it goes....
let me murder this guy wit quick raps/
ya punch lines hit soft callem bitchslaps//
get back..cause ya style is backed up/
just by ya name i can tell that use a wack fuck//
right now i can be runnin the game/bustin them thangs/
have u movin like that guy dancing under ya name//
two more punches and i just might zone out/
two more punches and ill make ya mind blown out//
whoa ya style went from "mint" to a ~mess~/
my punchlines hit hard till u see imprints on ya chest//
i need somebody on my cock to run round wit/
but not you dawg cause ur ass is dumbfounded//
now that i spit i hope u gon say shit/
my bars is bullets spit it under ya chin to give u a facelift......


i didnt see this so thats why i didnt respond... iight...holla back!!!

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my bars is bullets and u know im gon pop mine/ i leave you full of red just like a stop sign/

yo/get uh grip ..ya style is fucked up 4 real...
u shouldnt be rappin u should be singin pop like pharrel...
this guy has no talent..he needs ta prepare a little more...
u dont wana rap..ya mom made ya do it 4 uh chore..
he has no rhythem cuz he comin 2 weak...
cuz if he did he'd know he's already been "beat"...

this guy is wack..theres no fuckin with the prod..
da punchlines hit ya chin..make ya whole head nod...
just get it threw ya mind..u just got served..
when this battle is over u'll be servin me orderves...
u could never be nothin..except pamperin ya pimp...
cuz u cant lift uh "bar" cuz u buit lika wimp...
he needs ta get more focused...he's still listenin 2 me go..
usin his pen and pad..takin notes on howta flow...

one of my bars doesnt make sense cause he changed his avatar to make me look stupid (shook) scared.......whatever !!!!

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my bars is bullets and u know im gon pop mine/ i leave you full of red just like a stop sign/

troubledinocense

here it goes....
let me murder this guy wit quick raps/
ya punch lines hit soft callem bitchslaps//
ummm ......

get back..cause ya style is backed up/
just by ya name i can tell that use a wack fuck//
ummmm.....

right now i can be runnin the game/bustin them thangs/
have u movin like that guy dancing under ya name//
he aint dancing hes spinning the turn-tables weak....

two more punches and i just might zone out/
two more punches and ill make ya mind blown out//
weak...

whoa ya style went from "mint" to a ~mess~/
my punchlines hit hard till u see imprints on ya chest//
i see effort in this bar, its ok..

i need somebody on my cock to run round wit/
but not you dawg cause ur ass is dumbfounded//
that was weak and dumb....

now that i spit i hope u gon say shit/
my bars is bullets spit it under ya chin to give u a facelift......
weak ending u could of hit harder all around....

this was basic and sorda lame in some parts dont take it personal just work on being more creative and hit harder...

5.0

Da Prodigy

yo/get uh grip ..ya style is fucked up 4 real...
u shouldnt be rappin u should be singin pop like pharrel...
ok,

this guy has no talent..he needs ta prepare a little more...
u dont wana rap..ya mom made ya do it 4 uh chore..
weak...

he has no rhythem cuz he comin 2 weak...
cuz if he did he'd know he's already been "beat"...
ummm....

this guy is wack..theres no fuckin with the prod..
da punchlines hit ya chin..make ya whole head nod...
ok,

just get it threw ya mind..u just got served..
when this battle is over u'll be servin me orderves...
ok,

u could never be nothin..except pamperin ya pimp...
cuz u cant lift uh "bar" cuz u buit lika wimp...
u tryed to be creative here i give u a E for effort...
but try and reword that whole bar with the same idea and u could of hit harder...

he needs ta get more focused...he's still listenin 2 me go..
usin his pen and pad..takin notes on howta flow...
weak ending..

i saw u tryed to be creative in some areas but fall short on the hard hit but all around if u keep trying u can elevate dog...

6.0 outta 10

my vote: Da Prodigy

oo can ya copy and past one of those links i have and vote in my battle...
thanks for return the favor of a vote.....

uppin

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ima have to give this battle to prodigy. his personals were better
troubled had good structure but he seemed troubled to come up wit some good punches
so ima have to give it to prodigy both were pretty good tho
v=prodigy
please return the favor i need these closed!!!
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136648
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136408
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136404
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136610
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136344

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

uppin...2 more votes..i'll return the favor

I am going to have to agree with J Troop on this battle/


Flow: Tie
Punches: Tie
Meats: Prod
Multis: Prod
Wordplay: Prod
Complexity: Pord
Structure: Prod

Vote Prod

Prod's whole fuckin verse overall better than yours man, sorry but its my opinion/

thanks 4 the votes....one more an this thing is closed