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opt1k has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-13-05 10:47 AM.

got my rap game up homie it's essential.
if ya feel i disrespected you good i ment 2.
i kill whack mc's like you,my job,true lyricist
kill all in my path,crime scene,no witnessess
on the scale home im unique wit my lyrics
stylez very opposite but ur's,copy written generic.
true artist blowin the scene and this battle
can't even handle half of me u i will dismantle
we gettin voted for the illest posted skill
may the best man win,haha...dont worry i will........

no hate!!!!!just rappin!!!!!it's in the game!

opt1k/verse1

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E.C has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-13-05 11:06 AM.

ight check it....


Raw must be blind, recuiting you! now i know its an easy win,
coz you suck verbals dick so much your stuck wit a cheesy grin,
you can't be a skater, coz boarders arn't supposed to be blind,
but you could play with sand paper to say that u stay on the grind,
i got this locked.......... opt1k has got no other choice but to flee,
ill run circles around you to say i left you shook like the florida keyes,
so your the hot new talent........ but everyone has heard it before,
now ill just straighten you out....... like u was a hot ironing board,
i respect your judgement on r.a.w it takes alot to make a man,
but robbing shit out of hardwarwe stores is the only time u take a stand,

Explanations.


1st bar: nob cheese sucknig dick cheesey grin/smile
3rd bar florida got hit wit a tornado so shook up


g'lcuck and pz

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haha.....aight have people vote...nice hahaha....keep it real playa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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yo optik iz in war not raw but i lyked dat closer optik nyce drop family

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yo thanx khaoz for the feedback dawg holla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!word up my bad switched around!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!peace!!!!!!!!!! !!!!

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Voted For: E.C

got my rap game up homie it's essential.
if ya feel i disrespected you good i ment 2.
^^didn't rhyme...not a punch
i kill whack mc's like you,my job,true lyricist
kill all in my path,crime scene,no witnessess
^^^self glorified
on the scale home im unique wit my lyrics
stylez very opposite but ur's,copy written generic.
^^^weak
true artist blowin the scene and this battle
can't even handle half of me u i will dismantle
^^self glorified
we gettin voted for the illest posted skill
may the best man win,haha...dont worry i will
^^^Self glorified

Okay...here wat.Learn wat a punch is.And drop alll that stupuid self glorifing bullshit.Focus on dissin the other guy and that only.Save that makin urself look good shit for Open Mic.It's all about wordplay and metas

Raw must be blind, recuiting you! now i know its an easy win,
coz you suck verbals dick so much your stuck wit a cheesy grin,
^^OK..........didn't set it up good though
you can't be a skater, coz boarders arn't supposed to be blind,
but you could play with sand paper to say that u stay on the grind,
^^^^OK.....again...didn't like set-up
i got this locked.......... opt1k has got no other choice but to flee,
ill run circles around you to say i left you shook like the florida keyes,
^^^umm.....mediocre
so your the hot new talent........ but everyone has heard it before,
now ill just straighten you out....... like u was a hot ironing board,
^^^Nah...more like gangsta talk here
i respect your judgement on r.a.w it takes alot to make a man,
but robbing shit out of hardwarwe stores is the only time u take a stand
^^OK........

Not that hot.Kinda boring.But you actually had punches and attempts at wordplay.Work on your set-ups to make your punch hit harder.And while Optik had self glorification....you had gangsta talk.Save that for Open Mic.

Vote-E.C.
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uppin for more votes........................................

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Voted For: E.C

got my rap game up homie it's essential.
if ya feel i disrespected you good i ment 2.
ok..not really hittin
i kill whack mc's like you,my job,true lyricist
kill all in my path,crime scene,no witnessess
no no...get more creative
on the scale home im unique wit my lyrics
stylez very opposite but ur's,copy written generic.
ehh
true artist blowin the scene and this battle
can't even handle half of me u i will dismantle
ok
we gettin voted for the illest posted skill
may the best man win,haha...dont worry i will........
ehh


breakdown-from all this hype about you in RAW i expected a lot more from you...real disappointed in this...your punches weren't really hittin like if a blind man threw em...couldn't see any personals...and you weren't very creative



Raw must be blind, recuiting you! now i know its an easy win,
coz you suck verbals dick so much your stuck wit a cheesy grin,
ewww...haha
you can't be a skater, coz boarders arn't supposed to be blind,
but you could play with sand paper to say that u stay on the grind,
haha nice
i got this locked.......... opt1k has got no other choice but to flee,
ill run circles around you to say i left you shook like the florida keyes,
I live in florida ya bitch...but nice line
so your the hot new talent........ but everyone has heard it before,
now ill just straighten you out....... like u was a hot ironing board,
heard it befo...
i respect your judgement on r.a.w it takes alot to make a man,
but robbing shit out of hardwarwe stores is the only time u take a stand,
haha nice


breakdown-real nice verse...wasn't anything spectacular but it was enuff to beat optkiwre or what eva it is...

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Who made my Sig- Shief BITCH!

uppin this for more votes people................/..

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man whatever uppin for more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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