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10-11-05, 01:14 PM
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The Day The Condom Broke
IP: FEA7 665B
In relationships, teenagers often take the risk
Of being faced with kids, when the rubber breaks or splits They embrace & kiss, it's great and his Semen's pulsating quick, to taste her lips Giving fate a twist, it burst the barricade of Latex So much for the apparent term of safe sex A million sperms now racing the final course Along the vaginal walls, where life is born The prize their fighting for, soon clear in sight As the million white cells start veering right Up the felopian tube, as its sides then spread And each sperm looked to fertilise the egg Finally one succeeds, the racing's through Encased in goo, he'd found a place in her womb The Female Recalling the night before, as he touched her breasts Knowing they'd do nothing less, than succumb to sex That one wave of right, could change her life She had a gut feeling, one that something lay inside Late that night, she prayed beside her celtic cross Hoping the pregnancy results had tested wrong The Male Regardless of the previous night and them being dead close To the father, she was just another notch on his bed post Music was his first love and his gift in the art To exist with the stars, has them drifting apart He told her flat out: "Girl, if you have the kid Then goodluck and all but I wont play dad to it" The mother spent the next few months juggling her options And decided when the time came, to put it up for adoption This was the worst she'd felt, having to give up her own son But figured it was probably for the best in the long run How wrong she was, the reason this is easy to state's cause Ive witnessed this first hand. I was the child they gave up Do you know how it felt? Alone, scared and worse Growing up in a hostle, no clue who your parents were I've no beaming rays of light, nothing here'll change my mind The day the condom broke, was the worst day of my life This Was Originally For A Battle But Dude No-Showed It's Not That Good Erm...Post Feed Plz Links I Feeded On: God Qualty-Bizzo Jail Break-Malicious
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10-11-05, 02:40 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: CE5E 180E
uPPing...................
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10-11-05, 02:52 PM
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IP: BD4D 5087
Vocab meh, flow good, structure good, concept good, liked it, feelin it......keep shit up....1....8/10
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10-11-05, 03:04 PM
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IP: 8A05 210E
damn homie i gotta say diz is nice from how u should both people in there sitautions ....vocab was good, structure on point, imagery was there, & emotion spread thru-out tha whole piece sorry it happened 2 ya cuz i know how u feel cuz i'm 1 of those kidz also so keep ya head up & keep writing dez joints here damn...u get 9.5/10
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10-11-05, 03:51 PM
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IP: CE5E 180E
Yeh Some Situations Are True Bit's Arent Built Up From My Bad Experience It Aint All True It Was Lucky We Didnt Have A Kid And Thx For The Feed Man Upping This Isshhhh
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