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Old 02-23-05, 09:34 PM   #1
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yea, i just read some audio tutorials, and the quality of my songs will be alot better in the future. Leave feedback, i return the favor...
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Old 02-23-05, 09:57 PM   #2
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aight i fucks with the beat...flow was ehhh...needs polishing...went off a few times...breathe control problems...delivery needs some work as well...clarity could be better cant understand a lot of what u saying so i cant really rate the lyrics...overall wasn't feeling this joint.


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Old 02-24-05, 10:46 AM   #3
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couldn't hear your vocals...

flow is too choppy for this beat...

ur voice is okay


not good...not terrible

elevate

AMP those vocals and smooth out the flow


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