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02-28-07, 05:47 PM
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Johnny Voltaire aka Paranoid - "Around The World" (will rtf)
IP: 6BC9 4CDE
www.myspace.com/paranoidxl
Verses: Voltaire Hooks: Voltaire Beat: Spontane hit me with ya links I'll rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3147443 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3147441
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02-28-07, 08:57 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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ur flow was stiff on this...and you did not own the mic...ur presence was timid...and u did not sound confident
beat is repetitive and lackluster wasn't feelin it 1 |
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02-28-07, 10:24 PM
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definately seems like your opening was read off paper like when u say words like son it doesn t sound real ionno yea u got the 4x4 flow stiff as wood dawg u gotta roll some of that shit off ya toungue man listen to some prominant rappers gather a vibe of some different steez and mould your own like listen to the way u say vertibrate ur allowed to use pauses for effect man i will say ur gettin better but u gotta stepo ut the box
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03-01-07, 01:06 AM
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IP: 7950 1985
I sussed this...wasnt too bad, just practice recording techniques.
Keep at it man, time will tell the difference. |
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03-01-07, 04:45 PM
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Lol I said Verdabray not Verdabrate lol. meh I just didnt try as hard on this one I def coulda did it better. but thanks for the feed.
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