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06-06-06, 10:07 PM
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You Don't Know (Shear Kaughn) SOMETHING FOR THE SORRY ONES
IP: B8B4 D1AE
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229529
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229525 Just a track i hit up earlier this evening..got home from class and was like..hmmmm i think i'll do a track..and yes yes..i know i can't sing..but i tried.. www.soundclick.com/shearkaughn "You Don't Know" leave feed if you please.......listen and enjoy you clowns...... 
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06-06-06, 10:24 PM
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OYD
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IP: 2B7A 2084
beat is slick
delivery and flow are hot...which explains why your lyrics suffered some...up your vocab/references in here and it'd be on another level hook is funky and cool I liked it. 1 |
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06-06-06, 10:25 PM
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IP: B8B4 D1AE
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yea.....when i make a track its either my lyrics are dope and delivery is blah...or the other way around..i need to find a medium somehwere.....
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06-06-06, 10:47 PM
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IP: 7996 9D6E
nice beat man..quality is bad ass......delevery is good here....singing not bad...not good either tho....lyrics is nice n shit.....strong point is delevery here...
good track man
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06-07-06, 12:29 AM
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IP: B8B4 D1AE
thanks up..upity up pp
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06-07-06, 01:01 AM
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You Love My Style.
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IP: D745 5831
Beat is sick...........
flow- fits the beat...u on some royce kinda flow shit am feelin it...first time am hearin ya shit nice am impressed.....let me know if u wanna do a track...
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06-07-06, 01:04 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: A68E 9D69
starts with the classic eminem white boy whooo.....i dont even know if your white so your right i dont know you....buttttttt on the track, your vocals are clear as shit, but wouldnt hurt to be turned down a smidge.....the hook is ill....video game backround suprised me but was nice......you need to pronunciate some words a lil more, but your flow is nice.....well i mean your in oyd so of course your nice butttt, ya, ive decided to leave your voice where it is, but turn your beat up....yep then it would be a banger.....
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06-07-06, 02:40 AM
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Broke as hell
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IP: B8B4 D1AE
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haha thanks for the feed....but naw....i'm negro american......haha but ya know, you can't tell now a days now can ya.....i swear on my life that blak magik is black.......he sounds blacker then i do
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06-08-06, 02:10 PM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 5A3C EDE1
YEHHHH. this shits hot famz. nice flow. nice lyrics this shits a def banger. I'd bump this in my whip.
The production is ill. Sounds professional. The beat is fiya and the lyrics are sick overall 8.8/10 nice shit...
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