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02-23-06, 06:36 PM | #1 | ||
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Everyday Problems in Everyday Life
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Im struggling with the problems of everyday life
Cant deal with it,I want to end the everyday strife I have an itching buzz to end this feeling of pain Lurking is tha killer waiting for his chance to slain Then plain as day the haters tore him limb from limb Suddenly the light to heaven wasnt seeming so dim That calamity put me into a great state of depression My life was caving in and i cant escape tha compression I couldnt give up, didnt want to wind up on a flat line Why waste this great life and this even greater mind It feels like im trapped and cant get through this phase Where im in a craze...trying to find a way out this maze Tears of blood come pouring from out my eye when i cry Thats how i figured i was gonna die...From being bled dry I wasnt liked or cared for so like a typical child, i felt i failed Worked my way up,triumphed over them all and i prevailed Just kinda came to me so i added it to tha 10 lines i had before so i just kinda added tha last 6 lines to it...Not great but its tha first OM i have done in awhile...So leave feed rate it if you want...Word...1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222811 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222834 ^^Those are tha links to tha OMs i left feed on |
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