No D/r
C/v
No Bitin
Bo Recyclin
How Ever Many Lines
U Spit First

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My Bad
No C/v
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Aiight heres a lil keystyle....fuck it I dont pre -write....

I cripple ya lines...ya structure is weak
I compare ya skills to that of a Memphis Bleek
A lotta talk a lotta swagger...but fail to make hits....
u bout as appealin as a bitch wit no ass and no tits
u fail to make tha cut....ya skills is pathetic
even ya flow is whack...ya name is prosthetic
u rank up high wit tha best of fools....
but on Rb you below me....right under my testicles...
I bust caps...I spit bars....my shit never got a glitch
You fuck raps....U shit bars....you aint nuthin but a bitch
Are u really a rapper?I just cant believe it
Ya chances of winnin?similar to that of a bulemic..

AYO
ANOTHER ONE OF THESE WACK RAPPERS HAVE BOTHERED ME AGAIN/
LOOKS LIKE THIS BLACK THIEF BOUT TO GET ROBBED OF A WIN/
U A THIEF IT AINT KNO SUCH THING AS HALF WAY CROOKS/
U KNO U PREWROTE AND IM THE AUTHOR OF YA RHYME BOOK/
TO BEAT THIS LIL NIGGA ITS EFFORTLESS/
NOBODY UNDERSTANDS YA RHYMES THEY LOOK LIKE THIS/
U CAN BEAT WHOEVER U WANT U WONT GAIN RECOGNITION/
IF U CANT STAND MY HEAT GET OUT OF HELL, FUCK A KITCHEN/
IM AS LOW AS YA BALLS, HAH THATS PRETTY GOOD PLACE KID/
YA GIRLS TOLD ME YA SHITS WAS THIS BIG----------->()/
U CALL YA SELF A THIEF U GOTS TO BE LYIN/
AFTER I GIVE U UR ASS WHOOPIN, HOP OFF THIS SITE AND GET AN ALIAS/
ITS OVER DAWG I CAN LEAVE U WIT THAT/
NEXT TIME U BATTLE I HOPE U ELEVATE YA LEVEL FROM GARBAGE TO WACK

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Uppin 4 Votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin For Votes
Will Return Favors

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uppin
leave a link and ill return the favor, honestly

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man this was a crazy battle. its kinda hard for me to give a win to either one of you b/c the lyrical wordplay shown by you guys was really good. but if i had to chose a winner it would be:gotaasswhoopin4U b/c hits whole verse rhymed not saying your didn't Black but from the beginin "gotaasswhoopin4U" showed brilliance. i dropped ahonest vote be sure to do the same on any of these battle in my signature.

vote=gotaasswhoopin4U

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

U A THIEF IT AINT KNO SUCH THING AS HALF WAY CROOKS
^^^^^^^^^^^^dont take classic lines from 8mile kid.....be original....

em took that from mobb thief
and used it in that rhyme from 8mile
get ya facts str8 dawg

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I didnt say Em took it...I said YOU took it...and you not my dog cousin....Uno.....

This was a close battle both had good shit but when it comes down to it ass went harder. My favorite bar was asswhoopins opener. Thief was good had good wordplay alright flow, but i thought ass held it down through his verse so he gets my vote

Hit my battles up

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i was sayin though its not a classic from 8mile
its a so called "classic" from mobb deep

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ANOTHER ONE OF THESE WACK RAPPERS HAVE BOTHERED ME AGAIN/
LOOKS LIKE THIS BLACK THIEF BOUT TO GET ROBBED OF A WIN/
first line whack, second line ok
U A THIEF IT AINT KNO SUCH THING AS HALF WAY CROOKS/
U KNO U PREWROTE AND IM THE AUTHOR OF YA RHYME BOOK/
that first line had nothing to do with the second.. ok punch
TO BEAT THIS LIL NIGGA ITS EFFORTLESS/
NOBODY UNDERSTANDS YA RHYMES THEY LOOK LIKE THIS/
bleh.. his rhymes make perfect sense
U CAN BEAT WHOEVER U WANT U WONT GAIN RECOGNITION/
IF U CANT STAND MY HEAT GET OUT OF HELL, FUCK A KITCHEN/
ok.. not overly creative
IM AS LOW AS YA BALLS, HAH THATS PRETTY GOOD PLACE KID/
YA GIRLS TOLD ME YA SHITS WAS THIS BIG----------->()/
feed of his verse.. and then not flip it.. weak.
U CALL YA SELF A THIEF U GOTS TO BE LYIN/
AFTER I GIVE U UR ASS WHOOPIN, HOP OFF THIS SITE AND GET AN ALIAS/
alias and lying dont come close to rhyming
ITS OVER DAWG I CAN LEAVE U WIT THAT/
NEXT TIME U BATTLE I HOPE U ELEVATE YA LEVEL FROM GARBAGE TO WACK
ok punch, coudl have worded it better..

I cripple ya lines...ya structure is weak
I compare ya skills to that of a Memphis Bleek
meh.. not great
A lotta talk a lotta swagger...but fail to make hits....
u bout as appealin as a bitch wit no ass and no tits
original i guess.. not that hard of a punch
u fail to make tha cut....ya skills is pathetic
even ya flow is whack...ya name is prosthetic
ok.. could have had a better personal there i think
u rank up high wit tha best of fools....
but on Rb you below me....right under my testicles...
nice, nice
I bust caps...I spit bars....my shit never got a glitch
You fuck raps....U shit bars....you aint nuthin but a bitch
ok.. i think the style is constricting your punches here...
Are u really a rapper?I just cant believe it
Ya chances of winnin?similar to that of a bulemic..
kinda played... but still pretty nice

alright black, i think you forced this new style on some of your lines and i just wasnt feeling it, but you still had some nice punches in there.

gotass.. you bit lines, tried feeding of his verse, had a fucked up personal... you gotta elevate.

v/ black.

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