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E Looch 5 100.00%
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Old 08-30-04, 10:31 PM   #1
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creaTivitie vs E Looch

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Old 08-30-04, 10:33 PM   #2
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creaTivitie has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 10:33 PM.
 
Old 08-30-04, 10:34 PM   #3
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E Looch has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 10:34 PM.
 
Old 08-30-04, 11:08 PM   #4
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E looch....c'mon kid why you pick a battle with me........dont you no none of your d/rs are on right now....tiss tisss..you cant win with out d/r....

i never lie i speak the truth when i say you got potential`
as i manifest my rhymes...and bring death to a instramental`
got me feeling sentimental...so i surpass blurs, and bag herbs`
while this massocure occures...i get crowned king with my words`
see the creator has risen......your just a overrated oppisite`
my apex is to high...they claimed as an everlasting apacolipse`
crime syndicate lacks creativitie .........it culd never be class sic...`
e loch is living proof...been defeated and the measures are drastic`
kid your obslete...jus cuz u accpeted doesnt mean u can compete`
bitch just stop.....your better off pressing control, alt, delete`

aight kinda weak but im prety sure it was good enuf..if not we will rematch it...becuz im in a hurry...
 
Old 08-30-04, 11:10 PM   #5
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Quote:
Originally Posted by creaTivitie
metaphorical techniques..aye yo kid this is the crew to you...so wat im sayin is we aint complete with out oyu


was on my dick back in the day and now think u can beat me lets go son


ya words lack bite like muzled dogs ya rhymes leave no scars
like fat people tryin arobics strecthed marks is alias for ya bars
I phrase an harm got ears ringin lke bazed alarms
u could father 2 sleeves an still couldnt raise an arm
wannabe NaS rapper keep swearin hes a streets diciple
bitin my shit he really has a thiefs theme on a daily cycle
runs out of paper so create just prewrites on his vest
battlin mes the only way hes gettin shit off his chest
im consumed in ya eyes like cataracts supportin pupil babies
sunned u without adoption papers no need to follow with truthfull maybes
 
Old 08-30-04, 11:11 PM   #6
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E looch....c'mon kid why you pick a battle with me........dont you no none of your d/rs are on right now....tiss tisss..you cant win with out d/r....

i never lie i speak the truth when i say you got potential`
as i manifest my rhymes...and bring death to a instramental`
got me feeling sentimental...so i surpass blurs, and bag herbs`
while this massocure occures...i get crowned king with my words`
see the creator has risen......your just a overrated oppisite`
my apex is to high...they claimed as an everlasting apacolipse`
crime syndicate lacks creativitie .........it culd never be class sic...`
e loch is living proof...been defeated and the measures are drastic`
kid your obslete...jus cuz u accpeted doesnt mean u can compete`
bitch just stop.....your better off pressing control, alt, delete`

aight kinda weak but im prety sure it was good enuf..if not we will rematch it...becuz im in a hurry...


my bad...thats how it should be
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Old 08-31-04, 02:17 PM   #7
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Voted For: E Looch

Create-uh uh. not the best from you AT ALL. the only punch that stood out was the "control, alt, delete" line and even that wasnt all that special. you are gunna need to take looch up on the re-match. focus more, you can do better...6/10

Looch- wasnt the best ive seen from you either. punchs were coo, i liked the wordplay and punch bout the "shit of his chest". iono if yall just assumed each other sucked or what but yours was slighlty better....7/10

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Old 08-31-04, 06:16 PM   #8
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all these views an no votes damn all my shit is like this
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Old 08-31-04, 08:47 PM   #9
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uppin for votes..........................................
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Old 08-31-04, 08:50 PM   #10
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Voted For: E Looch

E Looch gets my vote...had harder punches...a nice flow..and a pretty good structure...but mostly he gets my vote cuz he had harder punches...
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Old 08-31-04, 08:53 PM   #11
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cretive gets my vote for sur he is a way betta rapper
 
Old 08-31-04, 09:00 PM   #12
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hello....im not voting....cuz i was JUST in CS so it will be labeled as a hate vote or sumtin...
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Old 08-31-04, 09:02 PM   #13
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creativitie

i never lie i speak the truth when i say you got potential`
as i manifest my rhymes...and bring death to a instramental`
nope it was basically a self-glorification bar for you and the first line was a glorification to E Looch 4/10
got me feeling sentimental...so i surpass blurs, and bag herbs`
while this massocure occures...i get crowned king with my words`
another self-glorification line basically 5/10
see the creator has risen......your just a overrated oppisite`
my apex is to high...they claimed as an everlasting apacolipse`
aight should of switched the lines around
so the second line would be the punch.....5.5/10

crime syndicate lacks creativitie .........it culd never be class sic...`
e loch is living proof...been defeated and the measures are drastic`
nope not great 4.5/10
kid your obslete...jus cuz u accpeted doesnt mean u can compete`
bitch just stop.....your better off pressing control, alt, delete`
basically another filler seen better from you5/10

E Looch

ya words lack bite like muzled dogs ya rhymes leave no scars
like fat people tryin arobics strecthed marks is alias for ya bars
dope ass opener I was feeling it nice wordplay
at all points but sort of played 7/10

I phrase an harm got ears ringin lke bazed alarms
u could father 2 sleeves an still couldnt raise an arm
1st line was a self-glorification blah.........
but you picked it up on the second line was dope
and tremendously great wordplay 7/10

wannabe NaS rapper keep swearin hes a streets diciple
bitin my shit he really has a thiefs theme on a daily cycle
ummm not feeling it but good flow 6/10
runs out of paper so create just prewrites on his vest
battlin mes the only way hes gettin shit off his chest
nice nice 6.5/10
im consumed in ya eyes like cataracts supportin pupil babies
sunned u without adoption papers no need to follow with truthfull maybes
niiiiice wordplay and good punch 7/10

ummm vote: E Looch
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Old 08-31-04, 10:20 PM   #14
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Voted For: E Looch

e looch cuz he had better vocab and had stronger hits...
creative you werent sucky but you had a weaker punchlines then him...
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Old 09-01-04, 12:06 AM   #15
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cretive gets my vote for sur he is a way betta rapper



LMAO!!

funny shit but uppin for explained votes
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