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12-01-04, 09:28 AM | #1 | |||
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road trip
IP: B7EB 8905
im on a road trip-speeding down the road.......... im on a road trip-unable to stop.......... im on a road trip-cops anit stopin me.......... im on a road trip-having fun in da ganster car.......... im on a road trip-signing hip-hop-dont-stop.......... im on a road trip going 150mph no problems.......... i was on a road trip and i crashed.......... i was on a road trip im in hospital now.......... im not longer smiling im giveing the frown.......... even since that day i learnt me leson.......... ever drive 150mph down a bust street.......... ull end up brush like a moldy sweet.......... all i can think of now is that road trip i cud of died.......... ive still got the broken leg form that day.......... i got fined by the cop speeding that day.......... the road trip was fun until we crashed.......... the baded bit the my face got mashed.......... |
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12-01-04, 10:03 AM | #2 | |||||||
***cITYSLICka***
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IP: F2B1 8D50
i liked your approach.vocab was simple but that goes back to the approach you took.
i liked how it went from fun to tragic so quickly.twists are great.keep em comin'7/10
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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12-01-04, 10:16 AM | #3 | |||
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IP: B7EB 8905
that was my 1st 1 ever.........................
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12-03-04, 05:23 PM | #4 | |||
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IP: B7EB 8905
coem on uppin 4 feed............................................
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12-03-04, 06:30 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 182D 932C
not to bad, not to bad, 7/10....keep elevatin you will be aight
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12-03-04, 06:40 PM | #6 | |||
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IP: B7EB 8905
thanx 4 da feed uppin............................
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