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Old 12-25-03, 08:58 PM   #1
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***Away in a Manger***

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yeah, this is for the topical shit this week, so this was the best i could stretch "Away in a Manger" and make it sound good.

flipped it into isolation and shit like that.

Beat : me
Lyrics : me
Everything : me

Lo-Fizzle

Hizzle-Bizzle

Keep it on the DOWNLOAD....

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Old 12-25-03, 09:13 PM   #2
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Nice Track


Man I Would Like to use Some Of your Beats There Sick

Get Back To Me

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Old 12-25-03, 09:35 PM   #3
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since no one copped the package deal, they are all $25

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Old 12-25-03, 11:03 PM   #4
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cheap bastards...........lmao @ at gettin shot.......i'm love that lil intro
nice beat......samples??

wooo....i see a lil change in ya flow.....im hearin some flippen....elevatin

wasn't on topic too much........i thought it was isolation....
but still on topic if you think about it.........

everythang was you.........so.........nice everythang

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Old 12-26-03, 12:39 AM   #5
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that was the idea of the topic, how the no money life puts u into a state of isolation...

foo'

lol

um..samples?...tryin to think....nah, i played the melodies out

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Old 12-26-03, 04:30 AM   #6
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ZZZZzzzzzzzz............
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Old 12-26-03, 11:54 AM   #7
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nice beat........flow and lyrics nothing special........I guess I jus look for originality that stands out from the rest, but if you were trying to sound like everybody else on the east coast.........job well done.,lol........intro was coo......stay up
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Old 12-26-03, 01:33 PM   #8
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the beat was iight.....


lyrics is good.....i like the intro, but maybe you should add sum1 else in it....like me it a convo between two people you know...cuz gunshots pop off from the person you talkin to right?...so i was guessin u should add sum 1 there too.


this was a good for a 1:26 minute track....
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Old 12-26-03, 03:42 PM   #9
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nice beat, flow was dope... good voice.. nice quality... lyrics is tight... dope track..
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Old 12-26-03, 04:42 PM   #10
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i guess to some people concepts/topics dont matter.

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Old 12-26-03, 05:30 PM   #11
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I thought this was stright, your flow rode the beat pretty decent, I like the bongos in the beat, made the whole song song full, the only thing that brings it down is your delivery, it dosn;t really match the punch of the beat to me, decent shit though.......
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Old 12-26-03, 07:09 PM   #12
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i like that kermit the frog shit lol



you make that beat?
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Old 12-27-03, 02:45 AM   #13
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^yes, to THIS one that you was supposed to respond to..lol..and the kermit one...

idiot..

i love you though!

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Old 12-27-03, 06:21 AM   #14
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listenind as i reply


this beat is fuckin raw

feelin ya prersence and delivery

voice is sicc chorus is ill

like to hear dope shit and this was dope

i like ya style

hit me up for a collab sumtime


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Old 12-27-03, 08:00 AM   #15
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nice beats ya got there.. mine are still better .. other wise nice track
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