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Hit the john and shook my dick... and suprise High was left pissed...
Man you'll never be able to handle my bars... like a unicyclist
Against the vets you shouldnt stand up... or like against Pana you bound to fall...
Left beaten and bruised with straight headshots... like them photo booths in malls
Where'd you get the nerve... with that record you cant hang with the best...
And I'd say your verses were hot... dog... but they're more of a sausage fest
Today's gotta be your day... After I'm done ya eyes will truly shine...
Then watch as you get laughed off stage... like successful sets at Carolines
I know you should post first but I couldnt wait dude...
Cause I'd fall asleep...
...I mean ya so boring a dail-tone would hang up on you

I kick Femes, skip Seeds and destroy Chrits Dreams
Your Rank Gleams???
This Bitch only notice Shine when he is kissen this Ring ( My Ring )
Depress-ion after this battle, is what you'll be Left-in
Apart of my sonning Collection...
With all of your Dick ryders, Porno must be your profession
So stay Aside, dont Imprivise and try to win this by Bribes
You and skill collide??? Yea right, and Pigs Fly
Your signature Fiction, please loose your weak Visions
His punches simply Friction...
Your prayers no longer work, I suggest switchen Religions
This is just the caption, So keep ya seat-belt Fascend
Eyes left Blackend... But that pussy of yours always ready for Action
I stay Vicious, Leaving people like you scared Shit-less
The future is going Down under...
No longer delicous, didnt know crew's started raoming in heards of Bitches ( Wits End )




Nice verse hommie, I liked some of those punches. But we will see who gets the win... No one better DR in here...
START THE VOTES

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Hit the john and shook my dick... and suprise High was left pissed...
Man you'll never be able to handle my bars... like a unicyclist
lmao great bar punch
Against the vets you shouldnt stand up... or like against Pana you bound to fall...
Left beaten and bruised with straight headshots... like them photo booths in malls
/\decent punch kinda filler
Where'd you get the nerve... with that record you cant hang with the best...
And I'd say your verses were hot... dog... but they're more of a sausage fest
eh first line is gay Records mean shit Chrit you know that but second line made for a dope punch
Today's gotta be your day... After I'm done ya eyes will truly shine...
Then watch as you get laughed off stage... like successful sets at Carolines
/\dope punch
I know you should post first but I couldnt wait dude...
Cause I'd fall asleep...
...I mean ya so boring a dail-tone would hang up on you
/\meh almost filler decent punch

HighClass

I kick Femes, skip Seeds and destroy Chrits Dreams
Your Rank Gleams???
This Bitch only notice Shine when he is kissen this Ring ( My Ring )
/\where is the punch???
Depress-ion after this battle, is what you'll be Left-in
Apart of my sonning Collection...
With all of your Dick ryders, Porno must be your profession
/\flipped horribly not decent
So stay Aside, dont Imprivise and try to win this by Bribes
You and skill collide??? Yea right, and Pigs Fly
/\this had potential for a good punch but you worded it badly
Your signature Fiction, please loose your weak Visions
His punches simply Friction...
Your prayers no longer work, I suggest switchen Religions
/\wack
This is just the caption, So keep ya seat-belt Fascend
Eyes left Blackend... But that pussy of yours always ready for Action
/\not decent
I stay Vicious, Leaving people like you scared Shit-less
The future is going Down under...
No longer delicous, didnt know crew's started raoming in heards of Bitches ( Wits End )
/\not good


well this is no hate i broke it down properly since it was a decent battle

vote - chrit better punches and overall better verse...props to highclass for trying though...elevate a lot more before you battle vets homie

peace

^ No Hate Hommie, it was a good vote ^
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Ok a good battle and I just got here so i dont bother dickridin like that othr kid..lemme break this down...

Hit the john and shook my dick... and suprise High was left pissed...
Man you'll never be able to handle my bars... like a unicyclist
sick line..nice punch
Against the vets you shouldnt stand up... or like against Pana you bound to fall...
Left beaten and bruised with straight headshots... like them photo booths in malls
nice punch not hard hitting tho
Where'd you get the nerve... with that record you cant hang with the best...
And I'd say your verses were hot... dog... but they're more of a sausage fest
this was funny..feelin that
Today's gotta be your day... After I'm done ya eyes will truly shine...
Then watch as you get laughed off stage... like successful sets at Carolines
shitty..not feelin that
I know you should post first but I couldnt wait dude...
Cause I'd fall asleep...
...I mean ya so boring a dail-tone would hang up on you
funny but indirect again..

Overall not a bad verse..had a coupleabove average line and a couple average lines with a shitty one too tho..nice work..

I kick Femes, skip Seeds and destroy Chrits Dreams
Your Rank Gleams???
This Bitch only notice Shine when he is kissen this Ring ( My Ring )
Nice multi's, decent punch coulda been flipped better tho
Depress-ion after this battle, is what you'll be Left-in
Apart of my sonning Collection...
With all of your Dick ryders, Porno must be your profession
This was hot, really feelin that..flipped nicely
So stay Aside, dont Imprivise and try to win this by Bribes
You and skill collide??? Yea right, and Pigs Fly
WACK
Your signature Fiction, please loose your weak Visions
His punches simply Friction...
Your prayers no longer work, I suggest switchen Religions
Weak
This is just the caption, So keep ya seat-belt Fascend
Eyes left Blackend... But that pussy of yours always ready for Action
indirect but a punch i guess
I stay Vicious, Leaving people like you scared Shit-less
The future is going Down under...
No longer delicous, didnt know crew's started raoming in heards of Bitches ( Wits End )
Not bad..decent

Your verse was average overall..nothin that overwhelmed any other part..

Vote : Chrit for harder punchs although this was close.. i think both emcees came weak..

holla

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aight heres my breakdown........

flow-not availible in text
structure-chrit
vocab-high
multis-tie
metas-tie
wordplay-chrit
punches-chrit
personals-high

overall-chrit

props to the both of ya, but ima say chrit takes this...........

yo can u please return the favor and drop an honest vote here?

I know your vote didn't count because you can't poll yet, but if you did vote, it would have been disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

much appreciated.......

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i cant vote so i been postin but i gotta say chrt u own but high class i rly felt urs

anyway this dont cont at all but vote:high

4 better puches flow and jus the way i found it

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Damn ya'll need to vote...

Upping I suppose

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( Hey Chrit, what did you think of my verse )

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Wasnt bad....

Need to elevate some yet....