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no d/r votes
no crew votes

I don't know where this person is at so I can't battle unless I have this opponet where are you at Daven Motion? Where are you?.............................................. ...................??????????????????????????????? ??????????

cHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEck In Nigguh.

Daven Motion cartoon hero name?!!! lol

I put niggas in check like a criminal in a airport
I shit on your whole style like Raja Davenport
Daven Motion better off changing your name to Daven Lotion
Like a guy who pays for phone sex you get none
I drop verses quicker then Warrick Dunn
This niggaz like a bum home got no home
I drop shit from here to rome your style is like chrome
While my shit is platinum
Like them niggaz that shot pac I comin stright for the dome
Like the Cleveland Browns season this shit is over

Explanation for the slow ass niggaz:
Browns record states for itself
Raja Davenport shitted in his homegirls closet
Dunn runs a 42/40

Disgusted by u..there's no chance wining cmon….bitch stink’s
^ scripts are fascinating ..rapes herbs, so I writ 6 hint’s
O.W.N-age…left your concepts amazed by words.
Specify aimed at him & activated. his an irritate nerve
Once I punch, he’s damaged…a forced chain reaction
Picked up knowledge...you should know..^that’s the way I Axe umm
Horizontally picked up..with bareknuckles, punch this fool!
Soft cat’s..adeble for breakfast dinner, N perhaps Lunch Is cool.
But the hunch is fool, known to me..your lame…N the fact is..
Battled Sergent, Da sviour ..<--came close., but ur the whackest!

aiight now you got both of the verses make your selection I fucked up on one line " The niggaz like a bum he has no home" vote vote vote do not comment and don't vote I can understand if you have under 100 votes. y'all can still put your input

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Originality - Daven.. no played concepts.. all fresh
Punches - Both.. Daven was witty and Jedi was raw
Personals - Both.. one or two each
Flow - Daven.. knitted ur punches together nicely.. caught it easily
Structure - Both.. easy to follow

VoTe = Daven

Less played concepts an some witty punches coupled wiv a perfect flow = the win.. not bad at all from Jedi.. jus a few too much old shit re-hashed.

peep this an vote plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103846

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I put niggas in check like a criminal in a airport
I shit on your whole style like Raja Davenport
^^^eh...weak wordplay, weak punch.
Daven Motion better off changing your name to Daven Lotion
^^^WEAK
Like a guy who pays for phone sex you get none
I drop verses quicker then Warrick Dunn
^^^ok wordplay, i suppose.
This niggaz like a bum home got no home
I drop shit from here to rome your style is like chrome
While my shit is platinum
^^^more weak punches.
Like them niggaz that shot pac I comin stright for the dome
^^^heh...ok punch
Like the Cleveland Browns season this shit is over
^^^lame.

Disgusted by u..there's no chance wining cmon….bitch stink’s
^ scripts are fascinating ..rapes herbs, so I writ 6 hint’s
^^^...what?
O.W.N-age…left your concepts amazed by words.
Specify aimed at him & activated. his an irritate nerve
^^^decent wordplay, bad punch.
Once I punch, he’s damaged…a forced chain reaction
Picked up knowledge...you should know..^that’s the way I Axe umm
^^^weak wordplay...weak punch.
Horizontally picked up..with bareknuckles, punch this fool!
Soft cat’s..adeble for breakfast dinner, N perhaps Lunch Is cool.
^^^weak
But the hunch is fool, known to me..your lame…N the fact is..
Battled Sergent, Da sviour ..<--came close., but ur the whackest!
^^^weak again.


vote: lyrical jedi


return the favor....

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=103574

^You Stupid Herb You Should Be Banned For That if you dont know what a punch is dont even bother entering my league the fuck? n00bs upimn..............

that vote should be removed coz if u dont understand the punch then ur missin it completely.. they were evidently too witty for some eh Daven.. shame.

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Both Verses Were Pretty Good....Though in my View Damon Took tha Flow,Wordplay,and structure......Botha Had Pre

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