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Old 11-17-03, 05:19 PM   #1
DthsMissingAngel
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Unhappy Are you still? (please read)

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This is a piece that means a great deal to me. Its a little short, but I would very much appreciate feedback on it. Theres not much flow, but I had to get these feelings out.


I love you yet was it a mistake?…
It seems like you push yourself farther away…
What is happening?…
Did any of your feelings change?…
I love you with all my heart…
Yet I wonder if I’m making a mistake…
Did I?…
Times get hard, I understand…
But can you tell me if you still love me?…
If you have interest in someone else…
Would you tell me?…
Maybe its just me, but all the signs are clear…
They say you have love for someone else…
Is this true?…
I’m wondering because I’ve been so in love with you…
Are you still in love with me?…
I’m scared because I don’t want to lose you…
So please, tell me if it is still true…
No matter what happens, I’ll never stop loving you…

Last edited by DthsMissingAngel : 11-17-03 at 06:20 PM.
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