Ok I'll go first. the usual 10 lines thing

So some say i need to elevate/ ok, now i've gotta chance, so let me playa hate.
I'll kick this guys ass worse than Slider's/ He's too young to be a serious fighter.
he says he's a savage so I gotta watch out/ One time He pulled down his pants/
but no dick fell out/ He thinks he's gotta punch like Mike Tyson/ I'll bite off his ears
and say i'll eat his son/ Quit trying to battle you stupid kid/ There's only room for one/
So don't try to kid/ I gotta throw a punch/ open your paper bag and find a knuckle sandwich in your lunch. i'll stop this rhyme scheme pretty soon/ It'll only end with me eatin dinner and you in the spoon/ can't u see stop tryin to rap/ go sing some R & B.

You not serious...ok mabye you are if thats ya spit....LET THA PAIN BEGIN...!!!

Kats who say yo need to elevate "Ain't Lyin", niggas who read ya shit hope you "Ain't Tryin"/
Should i spit hot for this wack emcee?...i don't even know why i'm replyin/

*Turn Up Tha Heat*

"Blazed-Wit-Smoke" just a "GAG" or a "PRANK" cuz "DNUFO2's-a-JOKE"/
Got a "Gage-n-Colt cuz ya punches like "Injured Athletes", just "PLAYED-n-BROKE"/
I'll take advice from ya "Sig" and "Rock 9 in Ya Dome" with the "Trigga-I-Stroke"/
This is a "Lyrical Beatin" my bars leave you like "62 Year Old Smokers"..."Coughin-n-Weezin" you know "Hardly Breathin"/
Since I already won this battle i'll give ya a rematch once your rhymes "Done Teethin"/
The flows sick *AACCHOO* look its got me "Sneezin"/

*A Simple Finisher For This Wack Emcee*

I "Called-Ya-Bluff" your below "Light Weight" your just a "Powder Puff"/
Your what rap used ta be "Plain-n-Simple"...you spit antique...ya belong in the "Attic" with the "Christmas Stuff"/

best battle ive seen so far, im suprised.

ima give this here to savage.

savage, you had some good punches, i liked your opener
it was dope, you had better structure, and good flow,
heres a tip, you need some more personals dawg.

dnufo2, pretty good too, decent punches, could of done better,
you had pretty much the same as him but his lines were better.

sorry, but i cant vote yet, since i took my time sayin what i tought,
hit up any of my battles.

Polled. -Token

u obviously aint read any of my battles both was weak. first dude's rymes were way too white. and the others too black, shit dont make much since ta read too many ""/ shit. if savage had a finisher he woulda easily won, my votes still for him but only cus u goin agianst whitey, chummon son... if u want a real battle call me out
vote savage

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i'm say it like this

if this is the Dopest Battle youve ever read ----then your fuckin wack ya self

complete merkin by young savage'''''''''''str8 up

he had better personals punches ---his shit flowed like pussy juice------and it was better worded with a much better vocab


Vote--savage

Shitty vote = Gone -Token

I would but I don't have 100 posts................

If I could vote it would be on savage..good disses and nice structure and this is no d/r vote because i voted for dn on another battle...ne wayz peace..and if u guyz have time check this battle out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108934

savage killed this guy clearly better punches he actually flowed ufo you should stick to rock and drop the hole rap thing playa it aint workin for ya and pictureperfect two's rhymes are week ass shit

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moderators piss me off............................

ok....were still uppin for votes please...........!!!!

vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107921



Vote:savage


he had it taken from the start with punches, dnufo2 you neede to aim more shit to him not at yea self

svage your wordplay and strucutre took this

from begining to end, work on yea flow and yu should be aight

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probably 1 of the worst battles ive ever cum across i think savage had a couple of attempts at punches but hey ull both get there in the end keep tryin