10 lines
normal rules
blind spits
drop in reasonable time

check in

check'd in....

Just so u kno....I made it 300 posts,
Im sure u don't care about that.......

watever works........................
check...47,50!

mdizz


Mdizz...chek'd in whatever work's^^...well in your case edit
This cat's pathetic...He aint his avi..But he'll leave red-headed
Yea carson said it, ya wanna battle me? what the fuck u on?...
I mean U changed ur name yeh....but ur still leavin down 1-n-Gone..
What did u think?...dawg I'm rollin harder than 4 wheels labelled brinks
Shoulda made this Pinks...cus basicly ur jus a whore in instinkz
He's R&B's best treat....but he never' the giver, yo check his feat
Please...I gotta tell this kid to stand cus he can't take a seat..
I didnt even check the state...but mdizz it jus occured to me...
U didn't want a battle me u wanted a date...I forget u rep'd new jerzey

this kids trash...X2? ima make myself loud n clear
his spits worse then Tara Reid,'way Carson-Jet outa here
tha end is near..a loss for u is no uncommon feat
so il exploit this fool like carrot top pushin for AT&T
ur not gully as me, oh no jets a gassy birds toiletries
i dont like penpals..fact is, im his notepads worst enemy
ur shit dude fuck carson's in need of a new score
..and he tried people..remember carsonjet...2k_4?!
if hes up for more..il own u for a line or 2..
but il tell u dude.that^^^ was made clear from line one-
-or two

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carsonjetx2
Mdizz...chek'd in whatever work's^^...well in your case edit
This cat's pathetic...He aint his avi..But he'll leave red-headed
5/10

Yea carson said it, ya wanna battle me? what the fuck u on?...
I mean U changed ur name yeh....but ur still leavin down 1-n-Gone..
5/10

What did u think?...dawg I'm rollin harder than 4 wheels labelled brinks
Shoulda made this Pinks...cus basicly ur jus a whore in instinkz
7/10

He's R&B's best treat....but he never' the giver, yo check his feat
Please...I gotta tell this kid to stand cus he can't take a seat..
6/10

I didnt even check the state...but mdizz it jus occured to me...
U didn't want a battle me u wanted a date...I forget u rep'd new jerzey
5/10

overall 28/50


mdizz
this kids trash...X2? ima make myself loud n clear
his spits worse then Tara Reid,'way Carson-Jet outa here
5/10

tha end is near..a loss for u is no uncommon feat
so il exploit this fool like carrot top pushin for AT&T
5/10

ur not gully as me, oh no jets a gassy birds toiletries
i dont like penpals..fact is, im his notepads worst enemy
4/10

ur shit dude fuck carson's in need of a new score
..and he tried people..remember carsonjet...2k_4?!
6/10

if hes up for more..il own u for a line or 2..
but il tell u dude.that^^^ was made clear from line one-
-or two
5/10

overall 25/50


my vote CarsonjetX2

Close Battle....Carson Had Some Ok Punches But None Hit Hard In My Opinion...mdizz Had One Quotable Which Is The Only Thing That Gave Him The Win...



Funny, LoL...Nice Punch..But Of Course The Guy Above Me Gave This The Worst Rating Of mdizz's Verse....

Punches - Tie
Personals - mdizz (Harder)
Structure - mdizz
Vocab - Tie
Flow - Carson
Multis - Carson

Vote - mdizz, For Having Better Punches And A Harder Hitting Verse...

Will You Two Check These With An Honest Vote:
FuE-xIoN vs. Kaos Theory (Wits End Can Vote)
FuE-xIoN vs. -Technician-

What The Fuck Is This Silly Shit...300 Posts?? When Did This Start...I Will Get If Fixed

Yeh...have some one edit your vote in...
your not a newby.....the 300 posts is to keep the herbs away...

ur not...have axe-feeb-or token fix...
thanks for votes uppin

.....................uppin..................votes. ...........

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Dunno if i can poll but i'll drop the vote anyway..

Originality - Both.. nothin played here
Punches - Carson.. each one was personal an witty.. no filler
Personals - Carson.. all but one line was directed strait at opponent
Flow - Both.. easy to follow
Structure - Both.. ^ see above
Multis - Neither.. thas coo.. jus a different approach
Opener - Carson.. crackin.. funny, witty, etc
Closer - mdizz.. saved the best til last

VoTe = Carson

Felt he had less filler an as usual each line was a personal punch..

Drop a vote on this plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1111738

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