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01-23-04, 05:42 AM
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Why is life like this?
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...572#post1117572
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...573#post1117573 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...574#post1117574 _____________________________________________ CHORUS Why is life like this?..Just a million struggles Gettin through the day brings a million troubles Then U start to think of the inportance of existance And tryin to get money to pay rent N dividends x2 Verse 1 Babies being born addicted to crack..Where's the love? Puttin children lower in Ur thoughts..Second 2 drugs I don't know how I should feel..I feel disapointed in U That U could want these chemical rushes injected in U I know life gets hard and every step is a challenge But it doesn't mean that you have to fall to the syringe Cos the drugs don't work..They just make you worse Til the day of the Judgement..Taken out of the hearse CHORUS Why is life like this?..Just a million struggles Gettin through the day brings a million troubles Then U start to think of the inportance of existance And tryin to get money to pay rent N dividends x2 Verse 2 Are U really pregnant...Is there a way that U can be sure? 4am..Teenage girls start to bang up on my front door Did you take the test?..Makin sure that the claims ain't fake Maybe she's lyin to get a piece of my estate,piece of the cake I don't know..Can I rally Trust her?Thoughts start to race Maybe I can leave tonight..Without leaving a single trace I'd rather face what I've done..Be a father..Do the right thing But if I find it's another man's..I'll have to get on that fight ting CHORUS Why is life like this?..Just a million struggles Gettin through the day brings a million troubles Then U start to think of the inportance of existance And tryin to get money to pay rent N dividends x2 ______________________________ jus to warn u...I ain't know no smack monsters N I ain't got no one preggers.. Just a topical awareness piece |
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01-23-04, 05:49 AM
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IP: DF7B C8F7
an ok piece, good message but didnt flow too well,
" I know life gets hard and every step is a challenge But it doesn't mean that you have to fall to the syringe" elevate. |
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01-23-04, 06:38 AM
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Yeah that was allright nice topic and u brang it out quit nicely although u could have made youre flow a buit better, there was a few quotables in there but u could elivate to somone good, keep writing
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