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LM 5 100.00%
.4885 0 0%
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Old 02-02-04, 07:23 AM   #1
.4885
Banned
 
From: Swansea
4885 vs LM

IP: 7EE2 9086

12 lines
no hate votes etc
blind spits

checkin in...
 
Old 02-02-04, 07:24 AM   #2
LM
Drop Of Genius
 
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From: The promised land
IP: 17AC 3451

Checkin in.......I'll start keyin somethin up now
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Old 02-02-04, 07:44 AM   #3
LM
Drop Of Genius
 
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From: The promised land
IP: 17AC 3451

Here we go again....

You keep Pm'n me askin to vote, so I know this is a easy win for me
Thinkin you a v outlaw...but you from the ever so gangsta Swansea
You Pm me fondly, chattin like you idolize my rec, consider me elite
Thats coz before you turn even near dope you'll have 4885 defeats
You a n00b, fresh meat, you're here tryin hard to make an impact
Thats fine....but stop Pm'n me, get the fuck off my fuckin nut sack
Damn dawg you wack, ya aint ever gon join a crew worthy of props
Fuck it! to you I've said congrats but thats where the respect stops
If there was a list of rb herbs+flops you'd be top of the fuckin chain
Coz 1 month ago, I spat some lines and last week you spat the same
I'm in the fast lane, dawg your in first gear, cant reach the highway
Coz even with this simple verse I know the votes will be goin my way


Goodluck...
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Old 02-02-04, 07:53 AM   #4
.4885
Banned
 
From: Swansea
IP: 7EE2 9086

OK OK, check this out...

Ill get ya drunk and doped, and get there via tipsy
LM thinks he’s the best product, but really he’s a pepsi
Fuckin homo! who fucks and sucks men for thin hours
U go down on men, quicker than both the twin towers
Do ya wanna be a millionaire? OK heres your question
Who’s gonna win this battle? Umm, 4885 I’m guessin.
So when I pop my lyrical flair, I rip your bones apart
We aint in Cansis son, ill leave you *lying* without a heart
I aint no Dorothy either, my **click** will be at your heals
We pop teck’s at chest’s, and finish off our beef, like in meals
You all ready know ya lost, coz I think you’re a lil diminished
This battle iz like a series of friends, coz after this line it’s finished

*Lion
**Crew

ok nice battle uppin....
 
Old 02-02-04, 09:56 AM   #5
.4885
Banned
 
From: Swansea
IP: EEA8 6B70

ok uppin for votes, ill return the favour..........
 
Old 02-02-04, 10:00 AM   #6
Casual
[/merk material]
 
IP: B89A 3C2B

Originality - LM.. other dudes opener was played an continued from there
Punches - LM.. cos they original an alot more consistant
Personals - LM.. obviously did his hwk an dished the dirt
Flow - LM.. other dude was all stand-alone punches

Vote = LM

Drop a vote on either of these:

Vs W1CKED

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341

Vs wogzta

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096

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Old 02-02-04, 10:09 AM   #7
MichaelCorleone
Flyweight
 
From: Dallas, TX
IP: D951 A4C1

this is a veru good example of when a newb takes on a vet.
4885 tried but he was battling like dude was in front of him. Lm attacked with the lyrics you expect to see in an online battle. he was original and used punches and personals.
4885 you will get better after you do a couple of more battles so you can see how they do it on here. my vote to lm.

vote one these
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111488

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111118

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111132
vote on those
 
Old 02-02-04, 10:10 AM   #8
ferrarihov50
Flyweight
 
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From: The abyss
IP: BCC1 F8A3

LM wins, it was far from FLAWLESS, but it sure was a FATALITY.
He was more consistent and his punches led on to the next line. His verse was a joy to read except fo the fact he kept talking bout PMing which was getting a bit repetetive.
It's funny to say that the line that stood out most was this one by 4885:

Fuckin homo! who fucks and sucks men for thin hours,
U go down on men, quicker than both the twin towers.
Tho he had the most in your face line, 4885 did not do enuff to secure my vote. He was a bit random(very little).
Due too better structure and flow, LM takes this.
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Old 02-02-04, 10:18 AM   #9
Baz187
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Posts: n/a
IP: 5231 3BF3

.4885 wanna battle
 
Old 02-02-04, 10:24 AM   #10
.4885
Banned
 
From: Swansea
IP: EEA8 6B70

dont freepost.....................................
 
Old 02-02-04, 10:38 AM   #11
MX
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Posts: n/a
IP: 65D8 B366

yo dis battle was straight LM was gettin some shit off but .4885 battle like he grew up wit dat nigga and knew everything about him so dat 1 under .4885 belt
 
Old 02-02-04, 12:51 PM   #12
LM
Drop Of Genius
 
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From: The promised land
IP: 2FD8 1A35

Uppin for votes (1)...............................
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Old 02-02-04, 01:24 PM   #13
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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From: UK
IP: 95BE 951D

Originality LM on;y just takes this one
Punches LM his punches hit a lot harder than the other dudes.
Personals LM he hit him with some pretty hard punches here!!
Flow tie both flows were aiight

Vote LM

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Old 02-02-04, 01:32 PM   #14
Daffer22
Light Weight
 
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From: BELGIUM
IP: 1E18 56AC

I have to agree, so vote LM cuz he had gud punchlines, flow was tied but LM was better so......
 
Old 02-02-04, 01:47 PM   #15
CAMROK
xNY~NJx
 
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From: New Jersey
IP: 244A F706

Punches, personals, creativity.. everything, its all better in LM's verse... typical vet/newb battle.. 4885 u need to work on all of that and elevate. read some of the other battles, but just dont steal shit. Really nothing left to say about this. 4885 learn how to spell Kansas, and get better disses.. bringing the Twin Towers into that shit is kinda fucked up too, but ah well.

vote- LM
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