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Old 02-01-04, 07:05 AM   #1
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ImCorruptinPoetry wit the Soultress

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keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind
elevate my skillz to where birds fly
will gouge out anybodies Third eye
belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie //

my vain burdon drinkin plain burbon
that i play mentals like brain surgon
Joe's king of the hill bringin the kill
addictted 2 dope not clingin 2 skill
that and i be takin a smarter route
usually i be blazin a quarter ounce
no hero fight defy these sterotypes
wit zero might they whores for christ
really i do depsise skanks n whores
live filthy, so Soul what u bathen for?
structure for rules in vain I ignore
the Norm it aint allowed me, no more
so now I...

keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind
elevate my skillz to where birds fly
will gouge out anybodies Third eye
belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie //

Justice will never be done, some say
everyday ends the same in one way
life's too complicated for any gun play
complex like should I now run or stay
King Koopa ran away like everyday
Watch the cartoon* you 'tarded loon
i speak like anyother crummy goon
one of many from the dummy room
but i alone...

keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind
elevate my skillz to where birds fly
will gouge out anybodies Third eye
belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie //

this free flow is how my cold palms talk
devestatin everything likE bomBS dropped
against me? Who has sumptin 2 prove
like Winner take all i gott nuttin 2 lose
2% like im nothing what this crazy Is
fadin duh im more like what crazy does
walkin around town with a crazy buzz
like said my 2 cents is what crazy does
spit Mentality when i spit my rottin rage
ebs be decapitatin kats like Johnny Cage
cant be denied !!!

keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind
elevate my skillz to where birds fly
will gouge out anybodies Third eye
belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie //
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Soul hooked the re-curring chours
I posted the verses, appreciatte the read none the less
*the Super Mario bros cartoon ya tarded loon
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Old 02-01-04, 02:04 PM   #2
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What about Soultress? None of this looked like her writing..

Anyway, this was OK..didn't really seem like poetry, more of an open mic, some parts just didn't fit at all and on a whole it seemed like you wrote more for the multi's than you did the content..Wasn't really feeling it...Stay up
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Old 02-01-04, 08:20 PM   #3
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i reflipped Souls part to make it flow better
appreciatte the fee still, stay up
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