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Old 02-04-04, 01:54 PM   #1
snakeyes
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Take a look, its in a book; A tight hook that makes you wana walk da plank/
this be the boat that never sank into the oceans depths, mysterious guess/
Don't know if life will go on after this nest, da hell wit rappers wearing vests/
fashionably loud, i detest as i manifest my destiny to uplift hip hop supremacy
don't flow to get known, just do it all alone in da comfort of my own home./
see, yall just don't know how da S.C rolls, day by day escaping gun sharades/
And i aint no gangsta, just young cat riding high for da laughter & da babes/
time to go cuz the library time is up in these cold days/
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Old 02-04-04, 01:58 PM   #2
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iight...

Needs some work...

Wasnt feelin the topic... Or the way it was portrayed...
You need to improve your vocabulary... Get more complex ideas and concepts flowing through your writing...

Not a bad drop... But a dont ever like self-glorification OM pieces... Very rare that a do...

Need to elevate...

Pz...
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Old 02-04-04, 05:46 PM   #3
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wtf r u all on about
wiv dis goin on i mite aswell go sleep on the couch
i thought the idea was to battle
not to think up stupid questions untill ur brains rattle
u wanna battle me n try n even get close
ill make u mopre embarrased than if u were wearin no clothes
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Old 02-04-04, 05:55 PM   #4
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