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02-06-04, 08:44 PM
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What Is Life???
IP: F127 8F9A
Resembles Life what once was held of Light, Too ample in itself for human sight ? An absolute Self--an element ungrounded-- All, that we see, all colours of all shade By encroach of darkness made ?-- Is very life by consciousness unbounded ? And all the thoughts, pains, joys of mortal breath, A war-embrace of wrestling Life and Death ? By Unknown Skillz |
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02-07-04, 02:42 PM
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thats a gud peice also!! i think summa ur best wurk is brought thru wen u write in short. keep droppin
..........fav part......... Resembles Life what once was held of Light, Too ample in itself for human sight ?
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02-08-04, 05:43 PM
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felt this piece and all good imagery
its hard to pick a favourite quote, but it was all good holla at me
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Last edited by Funky_phizzle : 02-08-04 at 05:44 PM. Reason: spelling mistake |
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02-09-04, 01:17 PM
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this is pretty good
i had to read it twice to fully understand and grasp the message it made me think nice and short, no complaints
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02-10-04, 08:22 AM
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IP: C97D D2CD
Very good poem, mostly because it was deep while being short. The poem would have undeniably have ended with mention of war, which is good. It is a great Idea to mention war of life and death in this poem because it is so very true. The vocab is ok, not much to say about it. The structure, unique, bleak, great. the length, short, but perfect. the message deep, heartfelt, philosophical. overall, great poem (sorry for the short response but i dont have much time and it is a short poem.)
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