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02-02-04, 07:22 PM
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Killa Status
IP: 5E48 7779
Now im devourin' these cowards, when i spit lyrical showers,
unfoldin niggaz like flowers wit these ill explicit powers, just bow at his fuckin feet, or prepare for a quick retreat, cause im not like these other niggaz, im eatin ya pussy beef's, I repeat, ill open up shop and the dynasty won't be stopped, bitches pop shit on the streetz till we step on the fuckin block, when i shock niggaz feel the pain, like needles peircin ya brain, i'll leave em physically slain, like victims that's hit by trains, i don't need to mention my name trick's you know its Da Killa, and im illa than any shit you fuckin bitches deliva nigga please, backin from challanges aint part of my style, this Kid's the brand new "Fuck You" posta child, fuck denial im droppin truth and i ain't claim to be the best, but im slowly approachin my status puffin out my fuckin chest. give some feedback cause i wanna know whats wrong with it.
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02-02-04, 07:26 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 399E F0FD
Flow ehh..& nothing was eye popping, some lines where ok... others were blahh.. & I hope this was only a keystyle. Not Bad if it was...If it wasn't, u need alot of work.
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02-02-04, 07:33 PM
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IP: 5E48 7779
it took all of five minutes, but thanks for that.
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02-03-04, 11:06 AM
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IP: 5E48 7779
Lets get some feedback people.
I need to know whats up.
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02-03-04, 11:25 AM
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IP: E581 5B3C
Erm....
Your flow was good enough....but the piece wasnt original. Good for a keystyle but think of somethin new and sit down and write instead of keystylin. You'll be pretty good if you put some thought into it. Hit up my open mic feat .:FreemaN:. + .:k:., the links in my sig |
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02-03-04, 11:33 AM
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IP: E7CB E3DC
yo homie, this was aiight piece, jus like LM n WD-40 said, this was good fo a keystyle but if it wasnt then u need to elevate n improve jus like im tryin 2 do right now. but overall i liked it... the flow was there...vocab was basic but u used in firery ways..so jus work sum more n u be on ur way to da top
N please return de favor n drop feedback on mine http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111845 Peace
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02-03-04, 12:14 PM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: 4577 CD9A
you did have few good lines...but other than that..it was ehh~~~LOL~~~nah not too shabby for a five min~key though~~~peace~~~check out my New OM...Dream or Reality...
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02-08-04, 12:16 AM
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IP: 5E48 7779
uppin for more feedback on this shit
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