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brethren | 5 | 100.00% | |
ak-mixa | 0 | 0% | |
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02-08-04, 10:23 PM | #1 | |
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AK-mixa vs. Brethren
IP: 8710 9D4B
10 lines max
no d/r no crew votes no hate votes no recycling no biting 1 hour to drop aftr check in......... dis is my check in..........good luck...........nigga
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02-08-04, 10:28 PM | #2 | |
Fuck yo couch
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IP: 232C DF48
this is my super duper check in to waste characters so I can post this god damn thing. Check
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02-08-04, 11:22 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 8710 9D4B
I breath and cough on wet mics like it's an ENT throat culture
when Brethren loses he'll be pecked dead by lyrics of vultures can't you hear it Brethren?........da winds scream through my mic I've been optimistic not seein you in my win.. not even plain sight it seems dat Brethren is constantly flowing like a clogged up artery beating me is practically chancing da powerball or odds of da lottery dis nigga only flows with his basketball and body floatin in da Michigan Lake my lyrics toppling over dis nigga like leaves in da fall dat haven't seen a rake Brethren......ya already know dat i'm cold as an AK straight out of da ice chest come with me to RB funeral home and pick out a "L" tombstone to put u to rest
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02-08-04, 11:31 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 232C DF48
Battle Me?! Your life rewinds and fast fowards, and path is 'lost but still clearer',
Check his battle, dude saying his name so much, I think he's jacking off to a mirror Nashville?! The only way this dude gets a W is from the 'middle of noWhere', 'Little or no flare' left, battling me never works, like girls with titties, but no hair, Probably a hillbilly, don't need to read his verse cause you 'reckon something'?, Blasphamy, like multiple orgasm, Brethren's about to bring the 'second coming', Spears leave you deader, crush you under weight, like 'piers do from pressure' Write your verse on people's backs is the only way people are feeling your letters, What you trying to lose? This battle's impossible, so just say 'bye to the cruise', I'll get five dudes to rip your verse clean, and stamp your head with 'Live Nudes'.
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02-09-04, 12:52 AM | #5 | |
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IP: 8710 9D4B
uppin...................for poll votes................and opinions.........................
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02-09-04, 01:00 AM | #6 | |
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IP: F978 8610
Here's an opinion..looks like you bit man
brb with the link |
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02-09-04, 01:03 AM | #7 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: E792 25F4
I breath and cough on wet mics like it's an ENT throat culture
when Brethren loses he'll be pecked dead by lyrics of vultures weak can't you hear it Brethren?........da winds scream through my mic I've been optimistic not seein you in my win.. not even plain sight no real punch here it seems dat Brethren is constantly flowing like a clogged up artery beating me is practically chancing da powerball or odds of da lottery weak punch dis nigga only flows with his basketball and body floatin in da Michigan Lake my lyrics toppling over dis nigga like leaves in da fall dat haven't seen a rake whack Brethren......ya already know dat i'm cold as an AK straight out of da ice chest come with me to RB funeral home and pick out a "L" tombstone to put u to rest decent...your best lines Battle Me?! Your life rewinds and fast fowards, and path is 'lost but still clearer', Check his battle, dude saying his name so much, I think he's jacking off to a mirror lol good personal....I saw that battle too Nashville?! The only way this dude gets a W is from the 'middle of noWhere', 'Little or no flare' left, battling me never works, like girls with titties, but no hair, nice Probably a hillbilly, don't need to read his verse cause you 'reckon something'?, Blasphamy, like multiple orgasm, Brethren's about to bring the 'second coming', ok..second line is kinda played Spears leave you deader, crush you under weight, like 'piers do from pressure' Write your verse on people's backs is the only way people are feeling your letters, played What you trying to lose? This battle's impossible, so just say 'bye to the cruise', I'll get five dudes to rip your verse clean, and stamp your head with 'Live Nudes'. ok Brethren takes this battle pretty easy..He came with nice and creative personals and metas.....AK had too much filler and weak punches in hes verse...Good drop by Breth..Vote=Brethren PLease dop an honest vote here guys...I took the time fo you. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112786 |
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02-09-04, 01:13 AM | #8 | ||
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IP: F978 8610
Brethren posted:
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Line he bit off of: Dont mess with my rhymes, I am straight up superior/ This faggit prolly jacks off to an open mirror!/ (lmao) ^^Source: Source for Bitten Line You all decide, if it isnt...then my bad, but it looks too close... |
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02-09-04, 07:15 AM | #9 | |
Fuck yo couch
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IP: DD8A D068
shut the fuck up .
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02-09-04, 07:47 AM | #10 |
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Brethren vs ak-mixa
IP: A965 0752
Brethren killed him in this one. His punches hit nicely and he had some good metaphors. I thought that the first four lines were particularly strong, the best being the personal about AK's " self-gratification".LOL. Overall nice creativity. Ak came flat on his verse. Punches were weak and a were played
Especially the clogged arterey line, and the line about raking leaves was wack. Made an attempt at a personal, but was too weak. Brethren proved to be too much creativly and with his punches/personals. If I could officially vote I would have to go with: Brethren |
02-09-04, 02:52 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 13A0 945F
uppin #2 , drop a link, we'll return the favor
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02-09-04, 02:56 PM | #12 | |
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02-09-04, 04:22 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 3F4A 2276
uppin............................................. .................................................. .................
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02-09-04, 08:49 PM | #14 | |
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honestly, both could of came a little harder on this one, not really any stand out punches here
as for ak - this was one of your weaker battles yet that I have seen, no real punches, just kinda rappin at this dude.....and the leaves/rake line was pretty wack nice structure, just not very creative compared to your last few battles, but still some aight stuff, kinda recycled........but not bad as for brethran- nice work here, although your ending line could of been much better....im even kinda confused on why you even said that........ say bye to the cruise is a pretty wack line and 5 guys to stamp your head with live nudes? what the hell is that supposed to mean.......you had nice structure and punches but adding the link to ak's battle was a bail out for more votes and im against it my vote....AK.......... but i dont have 100 posts so i cant count it....- VIllin |
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02-09-04, 09:07 PM | #15 | |
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IP: 6301 79A8
Dog this battle is just one sided...brethren's flow was much smoother (minus the opener, that was a lil off), his personals hit way harder, especially the ones about Nashville hahaha, liked how you threw that battle in there, his vocab overall seemed more elevated and he had what i like to call a better command of language, whereas Ak Mixer all your stuff was too played i mean it wasnt that bad but your structures were too weak it seemed like it was punch after punch and they were all too weak..if this were a physical fight Bretheren would win because its better to get some hard hits in and back off every once in awhile than to give him a billion fuckin love taps...
Vote- Bretheren Return the favor please this shit gettin slept on.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113239
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