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05-11-04, 06:02 PM
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Nameless Free!!
IP: C0C4 704D
just to start, I fill in the part/
fill your face wit lead, and stop your heart/ come play wit me, but just play nice/ dont fuck around, or become a Human Sacrifice/ my game is shameless, dont push me/ your name is faceless, you a pussy/ you aint Unique like me, so just lay down/ you like freaks??, dont fuckin play, clown/ my free is finee, so now Im done/ this was D, sorrYY, no explantion!
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05-11-04, 06:16 PM
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*Da FeMaLe BaNdIT*
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IP: 9636 A27E
u need to up ur vocab a bit..BUT the flow was nice nice...it went well short bars all the way through so the structure was good too *uno*
SB
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05-11-04, 06:21 PM
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IP: C0C4 704D
thnx Yo, and I will up the Vocab, just tryin to learn words to flow wit them good
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05-11-04, 06:32 PM
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IP: 89CF 84F8
good job brotha! yeah, it had good flow, shouldve added a little on tha end. but up your vocab and u be rollin homie! =)
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