hey, im new and dys is da first thang ive posted so dun be too mean... <3

i wonder if hes felt tha pain ive felt in tha black hole he calls his heart,
i wonder if hes ever had his emotions all torn apart,
i wonder if he'll feel tha same about me as i feel for him,
i wonder if he'll feel this way like i do again,
i wonder if i'll feel wut i feel for him forever,
i wonder if all these tears ive cried could go n form a river,
i wonder if i died tonite would he even shed a tear,
i wonder if he'd really ever loved me dear,
i wonder if he truly knos wut he's dun to me,
i wonder if he even cares.. well i do.. cant he see,
i wonder wut hed do if he were in mai position,
i wonder if he too would stay up at night jus dreamin and wishin,
i wonder i wonder i wonder,
that is how i spend mai time,
wonderin if im ever on his mind .....

~*~*xNottyXBabex*~*~

britania.. good shit.. listen work on the structure a bit make all the lines even it helps it soud better when they say it in they're mind.. overall nice tho.. work on vocab.. but some good stuff here britania

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