If I die now my momma would cry/
they sleeping i wouldn't get a chance to say bye/
If i die i would be better in heaven/
I ain't suffer as bad of a dead as the people from 9/11/

that was the chorus at the top

People say that They~Hate~Living but they Eat~At~Thanksgiving/
Man I want there to be a Life~I'm~Reliving but i'm trying to be last on the line of judgement Like~A~Seiving(Surname)/
I Pray~Almost~Everyday i'm trying to take all the titles like a fat person At~A~Buffet/
But God please bless the Place~I~Lay but I hope It's~Not~Today/
the people I wanna bless most is my Grandma~And~Mom feel like i'm stuck in a dark hole like when They~Caught~Saddam/
I hope they catch him with That~Nuclear~Bomb my style hard to pronounce like mispronouncing the Capital~Of~Vietnam/

chorus

to be continued..... Just a little keystyle

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Got my name imbedeed on your body like a tat(tatoo)/
Like the chinese store, lyrically I ain't afraid to kill a cat/
I see you true colors like ya skin tone/
I got my possessions in my hand cause i'm holding my own/
-Lyric-Theory

Um... it's ok but you left me looking for more. I think you should try to make it longer in the future. I mean you hit some complex topics there but just gave them a brief overview. And could you explain your closer to me - I can see that you intended it to be clever but I'm not getting it. Keep writing. Hit my "Broken Metamorphosis" if you can.

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Personal Testament 3 (100 Bars)
Befuddlement
Broken Metamorphosis
Cud

Uppin' for this

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Got my name imbedeed on your body like a tat(tatoo)/
Like the chinese store, lyrically I ain't afraid to kill a cat/
I see you true colors like ya skin tone/
I got my possessions in my hand cause i'm holding my own/
-Lyric-Theory

yeah yeah i agree with first dunny... if you got somin like this... keep goin at it... don't just stop an ish... u gotta produce the whole skit dunny... just don't drop off with a "continue" skit... i mean it was like 5 bars?? no no dunny... wackness.. come with more to this then post up... no half ass shyt... cats don't like it much... just helpin you out dunny...

Peep Out my piece/Return the favor... H.E.l.l. u will see what i mean...

Caesar - One

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~Sitting In Elevation Position~


Free
Agent

Just A Sick Newbie

Murked - Lust

Lost - None

Dying~While~Relying on my Time~To~Rhyme/Commited~Many~Lyrical~Crimes/I deserve to go to Heaven~And~Shine//
With~Lord~God/I~Will~Pray/While i'm stuck In~This~Pod/hoping to Live~Another~Day//
If I~Really~Stay/i'll try To~Be~Good/serving cats losses Like~a~Tray/Try to take my mom out~The~Hood//
I try And`Be~Humble//Drop my bad habits Call~It~A`Fumble/forget wrestling, fighting with myself is A~Royal~Rumble//
Soon I'll~Be~Movin/call it a hypothesis/It ain't a fact till proven/until then i'll Live~With~This//
Inoocent People~In~Jail/Living~In~Poverty/Can't~Pay~Bail/ But the po-po ain't all wrong defendants make Chillin'~A~Hobby//
See~What~Happens/A~Nigga~Snitch/a thug Get~The~Clappin'/ the same nigga that clapped witnesses it And~Gets~Rich/
God didn't~Want~Me/To~Die~Early/especially not By~A~Fatality/The world ain't right Now~You~See//
This Finshed time To~Say~Goodbye, to think about it I don't know what would happen If~I~Die//

fade out with chorus...

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Got my name imbedeed on your body like a tat(tatoo)/
Like the chinese store, lyrically I ain't afraid to kill a cat/
I see you true colors like ya skin tone/
I got my possessions in my hand cause i'm holding my own/
-Lyric-Theory

uppin' for this thread

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Got my name imbedeed on your body like a tat(tatoo)/
Like the chinese store, lyrically I ain't afraid to kill a cat/
I see you true colors like ya skin tone/
I got my possessions in my hand cause i'm holding my own/
-Lyric-Theory

well you got skills man...don't believe everyone. If they can't outflow you then you aint supposed to its cool to read what you'd go through

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Biggie was always better than Pac, ready to die vs tupacolypse now which was better

uppin'

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Got my name imbedeed on your body like a tat(tatoo)/
Like the chinese store, lyrically I ain't afraid to kill a cat/
I see you true colors like ya skin tone/
I got my possessions in my hand cause i'm holding my own/
-Lyric-Theory