Battle Rules:

10Lines
45 mins to drop your shit
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-03-04 at 08:33 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

str8_hood has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 07:51 PM.

x-on has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 07:53 PM.

there u go. thats only 8

I’ll put a x on ya life slap u around and watch u buckle
Claims he blasts heat the only thing you’ll pop is ya knuckles

U embarrass the bay, ya style is garbage
Even if u stepped on the dictionary, u couldn’t kick knowledge

You a rookie in this rap game, me ima grown killer
How u think u gonna beat me when half of ya verse if filler?

I’ll beat you in 10 lines cause im tighter and im sicker
Your girl said my strokes better than the williams sisters(tennis players)

Tie your seat belts.. X-on baby. Vison of Mind... holla


Ayo:
-"Str8_hood" why is it that for some reason I aint scared of you dog?/
Chances of you beating me is like finding an airplane with the sky filled with fog/
So why you so upin to get this battle going like " YES YES YES" you for real/?
Cause you know at the end you gonna be in wooden sarcufigues and that's the deal//
You think you can crack this X-on, if you do should get the nobel prize/
Cause my shit like the pythegrum therum hard to recognize//
I've seen you type, write a name and try to creat a new person right?/
well my hip hop orical sences you aint hood, probley never been in a fight?//
So do us all a favor there little "HOODSTA" and just log off now/
Cause i've seen biggest gagnsta's at the cd signing of little lil bow wow//
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I’ll put a x on ya life slap u around and watch u buckle
Claims he blasts heat the only thing you’ll pop is ya knuckles
(hahah I didn't say shit about that.. weak dog... Nice opener, oh no!)

U embarrass the bay, ya style is garbage
Even if u stepped on the dictionary, u couldn’t kick knowledge
(How is my style grabage if you didn't here me yet?"

You a rookie in this rap game, me ima grown killer
How u think u gonna beat me when half of ya verse if filler?
(Oh Killa? is that why your name is Str8 hood?) hhaha not feeling it.


I’ll beat you in 10 lines cause im tighter and im sicker
Your girl said my strokes better than the williams sisters(tennis players)
( why you saying you gonna beat me in 10 lines and the only write 8?, wack closer)


you know the deal.. hahah holla one..

X-on baby, Vison of mind.

shut up and stop tryin to persuade everyone to vote for u. let them decide on their own. uppin 4 votes

Voted For: str8_hood

St8 hood had a better opener to start. then he came with nice punches afterwards. he had a steadier flow, transition bwas better and his structure was also tighter.. wordplay for him was nicer too, no kiddy rhymes really.. his closer also ended it pretty well, so i gotta give this to st8 hood, he put more thought into it.

PLz, return the favor with an honest vote right, thx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153028

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uppin for some more votes. dont sleep on this........................

ayo come on still uppin for votes........................

Voted For: str8_hood

aight....str8 takes this.......cos his second and hird barz were punches tht hit....decent verse from u.....expand ya vocab and throw harder punches u be good....flow and structure was good....and u had wordplay in ya punches wich i like.......overall....decent verse...

x-on..aight verse...but the punches didnt connect...they were punches...but its like they was nuthin to them..add a lil wordplay...altho ur vocab was alot better.....get ya structure and punches right...u be good too....overall..ok verse...

ma vote=str8 hood

no hate....pz

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Voted For: str8_hood

wow very much soone sided

X:dog man your lines were terrible
I aint tryin to be mean but I'm bein real
you need to quit wit the self glory
and weak wordplay and weak structure AND gansta rap
if you need help IM me
and i can help u for 100

Str8:not the bets i've seen from youy

u had some self glor adn sex jokes
but the flow for you stays on point
and structure seems newbish tho
cuz most newbs use it and your NOT a newb

i liked the wordplay as usual tho
so of cource you win

pcs

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Voted For: x-on

a you won this battle better pun
other guy what were you thinking about

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ok uppin 4 votes. and can i get that vote dq'd casue it obviously was not explained