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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
04-13-04, 03:48 PM
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second 2 none
IP: 00F9 20B8
yo yo
im wn compared to me man u iz feminine im tha next eminiem, no im betta then him im tha next tupac shakur, no, i iz more thtz right, hez the best rappa eva, well he waz but im betta, all ma life ppl be puttin me down sayin, no way neva well im gonna prove dem all rong, n im gonna start by rappin thiz song ye soon girl im gonna b sein ya thong, hittin u frm da bk wit my dingdong yea im gonna be big, but every1 will envy me, ill have bout 5000 wigz, just to get privacy privacy frm ppl like u, c, u iz a wannabe wannabe me a real g, like tupac n biggie well they iz like me, cuz i iz second to none i own the game n make tha fun, son Last edited by wn : 04-13-04 at 04:31 PM. |
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04-13-04, 04:04 PM
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IP: E813 77AB
that waz second 2 none
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04-13-04, 06:16 PM
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G.Y.T.
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IP: 2208 FC10
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04-18-04, 03:06 PM
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IP: 2D87 9689
ne1 else
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IF U LIVE BY THA GUN U DIE BY THA GUN R.I.P TUPAC N BIGGIE DEREZ A HEVEN 4 A GANSTA |
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04-18-04, 07:09 PM
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IP: 9F91 F985
aight you must be a newbie so i'll give you some advice..first of all you need to spell your words correctly even the basic ones, you need to stay on your topic through out the verse, and you need to improve your vocabulary, you should get hooked on phonics or some shit to help your illiteracy cause your verse as a whole was 100% ignorant and uneducated..no disrespect but this was a terrible verse and if you take time to think about what your goin to write about you might see a significant difference..take my words into consideration and just improve and elevate..one
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