now its dagreatest vs Juss_Blaze/
aint no competition i'ma tear his ass/
after this first verse its simple as that/
on the floor i'll lay you ass flat/
i'm lyrically blessed on the mic/
i dont use bullets/
i kill people with rhymes/
dont even think about it/
i'll slaughter you before you put up a fight/
by the time you come up with something/
half way decent as mine/
sorry you just ran outta time/
you cant rap to save your life/
dont try to hide it/
this might be the last thing you do/
cos you messing wit someone thats criminal minded/
like nas said "I'll embrace ya with nepalm/
"legs, chest, hair face gone"/
use you as the prime example/
why you shouldnt mess wit dagreatest da true don/
you feeling the heat/
all the way from London/
you should rename you name to name-biter/
call yourself Juss_Blaze/
you aint him from rocafella/
you get paid for being a cocksucka

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can someone tell me how my verse was, i just need to know if i'm improving or not

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excuse me, im blowin up dog, this aint a bomb threat/
i got guns that beam you up, like you in Star Trek/
U steppin up all hard and talkin shit/
my guns so big that you think they shoot rocket ships/
go be a janitor, cuz you cant rep mikes/
your skill is non-existent, like your sex life/
you aint fukkin me up dog, maybe a next fight/
you? win this battle? maybe a next life/
you aint dagreatest,nigga you rhyme the softest/
my rhymes bad like i wrote them in the principal office/
your career was good, but now you just blew it/
i would say "kiss my ass," but nah, u might do it/
u sayin i aint the best. u call me a liar?/
im blowin up the mic like a 10 ton bomb/
then i slap yo faggot ass like im Elton John/
im in a rap university with a full scholarship/
you aint on my level, you in community colleges/
so next time u step and wanna cuss my rhymes/
i break your fukkin neck like Busta Rhymes/

damn that was sick. dagreatest you were straight. juss blaze was better.
he came hard . nice metas and everything.

vote-juss blaze

c'mon Juss_Blaze, u called me out, do your verse, i'm uppin for votes with or without your verse

oh for god sakes, someone atleast post something in here please

i made a mistake. read this instead

excuse me, im blowin up dog, this aint a bomb threat/
i got guns that beam you up, like you in Star Trek/
U steppin up all hard and talkin shit/
my guns so big that you think they shoot rocket ships/
go be a janitor, cuz you cant rep mikes/
your skill is non-existent, like your sex life/
you aint fukkin me up dog, maybe a next fight/
you? win this battle? maybe a next life/
you aint dagreatest,nigga you rhyme the softest/
my rhymes bad like i wrote them in the principal office/
your career was good, but now you just blew it/
i would say "kiss my ass," but nah, u might do it/
u sayin i aint the best. u call me a liar?/
i spit hot shit, like great balls of fire/
im blowin up the mic like a 10 ton bomb/
then i slap yo faggot ass like im Elton John/
im in a rap university with a full scholarship/
you aint on my level, you in community colleges/
so next time u step and wanna cuss my rhymes/
i break your fukkin neck like Busta Rhymes/

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yea juss i think gott this B/c he had harder punch but dagreatest verse was god but not hard enough but juss blaze was try'n to hard wit them wack punches i'm off that
Vote=juss blaze


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This battle wans't too good.....dagreatest....I think that you should extend your bars..........and also work on your flow............because your verse looked elementary.......1.5/10

Juss Blaze......your verse wasn't great....but it was better................juss work on your flow also............and the rest will follow............4/10

juss blaze, go this
because he killed dagreatest with his punclines
meta and simi-juss blaze
vocab-juss blaze
flow- juss blaze
multi's -juss blaze


juss blaze was just better on this one,
dagreatest, you need to wrk on getting better punchlines

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stay true, cuzez

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