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work in progress wantin sum feedback
IP: 9267 0BC6
Wana fuck with me, then your fucking with g's
We never say please bitches just get on their knees Dont matter what we blaze brakken or green. ethier fuckin way were gena lean This aint a game were brining torture and pain use singles semis or automatics were used to straight jackets, rude boys runnin heavy drug rackets think your crazy as this You've never witnessed a breda drink his own piss were just g's ryhming exact pin point timin lyrically redefining Watch them miner hoes Gold diggin for designer clothes Spend your money like its theirs to own You need to stop spreading that lie, i rest easy at night knowin you gena die Consider this a truce until the next full moon im letting you know that death will be here soon Wait with baited breath till were rage filled creatures Destroying your face when i carve of your features Handling missions like the best, expect nothing less thugged out killers resembling the sas |
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IP: 4577 CD9A
da beginnin iz wacc cuz its old as hell im tired of hearin da same line with please and knees itz bout 5 or 6 years old, but some lines were hot some were not
faovorite was "watch them minor hoes gold diggin for designe clothes" but whe u said "think your crazy as this you've never witnessed a breda drink his own piss" it sound like some eminem shit. theres only one eminem |
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Suspended: Cheating
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IP: 75CE A0E1
it was bangin.
you should focus on elevation. expand your vocab. other than this nice job. |
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New to RB
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IP: C1DA C961
Need to work on word structure and wordplay. And try to make ya beginnin hot as shit
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THE COUNCIL
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IP: 6D9E 466F
not bad, keep elivating, maybe work on the complexity and being creative saying new shit in new ways not old shit in new ways
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Flyweight
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IP: 22ED 1BB0
Good, but juss think of a better subject.
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New to RB
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IP: 898A F4DE
Coming back at Da-One:
great comments but needed to come back on that shit about eminem: Double c has an older brother, who did, on new years eve 2001, under the influence of weed, pills, mushrooms & vodka, and on a most cruel of cruel dares, to prove he could go beyond what most mortal men are capable of: he assumed a possition of that which is associated with the "upside-down bycicle kick" found most prominently in "legs, bums & tums" classes across the atlanitic and beyond. From this possition, he did piss, long & hard into his own mouth, rising thereafter to declare..."I am KING OF THE PISS-DRINKERS..." before exiting swiftly stage left to the bathroom. Vidieo Footage is available on request |
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New to RB
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IP: 2A85 59BA
Not bad CC, Just gotta watch out for fallin out of rythm. Some of the lines kinda dropped off too early. I can't comment too much on your style, cause...it's your style, but if you want word, try to come off tha velveta.
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