yo check it,


I spit a liquid that they would'nt know would exist/
rhymes so dope they got injected in the siringe/
I just open my mouth ya'll start to flinch/
my dope culture is one of a kind/
i'm so deadly, i'm lyrically assasinating my own mind/
my skill can only be seen by the man who's blind/
yo body is being traced by the dotted line,
play connect the dots, see what it comes up to/
whats crazy is of u theres two, one lookin down and one lookin up at u/
look a little to the left theres the rest of your crew, layin flat/
thats what happens when I take out the gap/
give a hard stare you gonna get part of that/
play in wooden chess and i'll shout my own name out/
spit so much flame i'm surprised my whole grill ain't flamed out/
i'm too strong so I take my own pain out/
i'm so bright that I glow in the dark/
I make a flamethrower look like if it throws sparks/
I got my dogs around my weist, for any reason they bark/
I bust shoots in the dark/
i'm silently killin u by rippin your heart/
don't try to touch me cause i'm lyrically packed like carts.

dis was doper thanda last shit you did. you should be online more often

i give ya madd props.

much love, demolish

dis was nice "I spit a liquid that they would'nt know would exist/
rhymes so dope they got injected in the siringe/" dat was a nice line wid a good meanin..but it didnt rhyme...godd vocab..but next time use mulitpus ...keep it up bro....6/10

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Thanx dog,
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can a dawg get some feedback