Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
|
View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
YOUNGSTAR* | 0 | 0% | |
$$UPREME | 5 | 100.00% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
|
Thread Tools | Search this Thread | Display Modes |
03-12-04, 08:41 PM | #1 | |
Suspended: Biting
|
youngstar* vs $$upreme
IP: EC0B 84C7
10 line minimum
i'll spit first |
|
03-12-04, 08:54 PM | #2 | |
Youngin jus call me Young
|
IP: 4948 3CF8
iight..i accept that..first to 5 votez
and spit in by 10 |
|
03-12-04, 09:10 PM | #3 | |
Youngin jus call me Young
|
IP: 4948 3CF8
u sed u spit first..so go...git ya spit on.........
|
|
03-12-04, 09:24 PM | #4 | |
Suspended: Biting
|
IP: EC0B 84C7
I Ruin Young Mc's Rap Career's//
Cuz The Venom That I Spit Is Way Severe// Why U So Down U Look Under The Weather// Crack A Smile My Rims Spin Like Plane Prepellars// If A Nigga Or A Bitch Wanna Battle Me It's All The Same// I Just Kick Some New Shit And Spit Some Game// C With A Gun In My Hand I Can't Fail// I Got Guns And Ammo And There All For Sale// Smoking Rapper's Be My Favorite Habit// My Style Is The Shit It Aint For Sale But Mc's Always Wanna Have It// I Spit The Shit That Aint For Polishing Shoes// But For Putting These Niggaz Lyrics In Coffins And Thats Just What I Gotta Do// |
|
03-12-04, 09:57 PM | #5 | |
Youngin jus call me Young
|
IP: 4948 3CF8
yeah i figured u cud spit shit
but u gon fuck around and git ya ass split yeah got u so confused u spittin and wanna quit i wear u out like u wuz a baseball mit Pop ur bubble like u wuz a nasty zit erybodi want me but to no one i will commit i had to git a license so ma spit cud be legit ya ass so whack they label u a misfit i wanna spit so that ur ass i can omit ma lyrix so nastyl they can barely permit ma spit so sharp had to git a first aid kit spit so harsh it got u throwin a fit u got lost in ma linez like u in a bottomless pit |
|
03-12-04, 09:59 PM | #6 | |
Youngin jus call me Young
|
IP: 4948 3CF8
YO YA"LL VOTE 4 US 5 votes win...3-0KO
HOLLA BAK |
|
03-12-04, 10:41 PM | #7 | |
i changed my title !!
|
IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for youngstar:
flow:a good flow but really simple 6/10 punches:nothing really great here best punch was, "u got lost in ma linez like u in a bottomless pit" aside from that mah? 4/10 volcab: nothing really, just basic small worded rhymes got the job done but nothing great 3/10 overall: 13/30 really lack luster nothing special breakdown for supreme: punches:nothing really i mean it not trying to diss but i don't see a single punch just some open disses i can't even pick a fav line there just isn't one 2/10 volcab: really low on this too better then your oppenent but nothing great 6/10 flow: good flow kinda basic but alright 6/10 overall:14/30 vote-- my vote goes for supreme he was the lesser of two bads
__________________
win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
|
03-14-04, 07:15 PM | #8 | |
Suspended: Biting
|
IP: EC0B 84C7
we only got 1 vote in 2 days
uppin for some more votes |
|
03-16-04, 01:56 PM | #9 | |
Suspended: Biting
|
IP: E3CA 7CA2
We Need More Votes For This One
Damn We Need Some Honest Votes Holla Back |
|
03-16-04, 05:33 PM | #10 | |
Ask About Me
|
IP: E3CA 7CA2
aight imma have to give this one to surpreme...but this was truly a weak battle.
supreme: you was hella sorry but i no you can do betta..punches not really that good..meta4s not really any...vocab, NONE..structure was good..all in all5/10 star: i no for a fact that you could do betta...mayb you just need a lil mo practice..but the only line i was fillen was the bottumless pit one...to me it sounded like you was repeatin the same thing..punches not to good...vocab not to good... next time you need to come wit your best even if his shit was weak..all in all 4/10
__________________
my MYSPACE is Better than Yours |
|
03-18-04, 01:20 AM | #11 | |
Youngin jus call me Young
|
IP: 4948 3CF8
UPPIN FOR VOTEZ YO YO YO YO...up up up..thanx for honest votes
|
|
03-19-04, 01:45 PM | #12 | |
Suspended: Biting
|
IP: E3CA 7CA2
Uppin 4 Votes
My Shit Was Weak But I Still Had More |
|
03-19-04, 05:52 PM | #13 |
Drop of Genius
|
IP: E3CA 7CA2
((((JaCKOfAllTRaDeS))))
Supreme came through with some koo shit that got too the point and some good punches in but youngstarr no effense but your shit kinda bored me but its all good just keep battling ang hit hard every line dont focus too much on ryming but more of feeling hurting IM OUT!!!!! My vote goes too $$upreme |
03-19-04, 06:58 PM | #14 |
New to RB
|
IP: E3CA 7CA2
Ruin Young Mc's Rap Career's//
Cuz The Venom That I Spit Is Way Severe// Why U So Down U Look Under The Weather// Crack A Smile My Rims Spin Like Plane Prepellars// If A Nigga Or A Bitch Wanna Battle Me It's All The Same// I Just Kick Some New Shit And Spit Some Game// C With A Gun In My Hand I Can't Fail// I Got Guns And Ammo And There All For Sale// Smoking Rapper's Be My Favorite Habit// My Style Is The Shit It Aint For Sale But Mc's Always Wanna Have It// I Spit The Shit That Aint For Polishing Shoes// But For Putting These Niggaz Lyrics In Coffins And Thats Just What I Gotta Do// Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Cprogress
__________________
WHERE YOU FROM ? |
03-20-04, 01:21 AM | #15 | |
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
|
IP: 5163 724B
Plain and simple...........Young was pretty wack. You need to step up your rhymes and think about some shit before you write it. Don't just write words that rhyme.......make people say "Ohh Shit!"
$$upreme was a little weak too but his punches were a little bit better. You can still use some work on your shit, though. Vote-$$upreme
__________________
|
|
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|