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poetictendenceez | 5 | 83.33% | |
Afterword | 1 | 16.67% | |
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03-25-04, 01:26 AM | #1 | |
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afterword vs poeticaltendenceez
IP: CE13 565F
rules have been stated
cum out swinging
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03-25-04, 01:31 AM | #2 |
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i'll post tomorrow...you took so long to respond damnit.....go ahead and post if you got something, i won't bite...word...peace
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03-25-04, 07:43 PM | #3 | |
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yur lame
how long do u need? 4get poetic, u got negro tendencies( colored people time) and that shouldnt offend no 1 cuz im a brotha
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03-25-04, 09:29 PM | #4 |
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ayo, check
negro tendencies, fuck yeah I'm a goddamn nigger ~ the only thing black bout you is your tongue ~ asshole licker// a hustla with inteligence, 20 years old and fucking "living"* ~ the only fun that interests you is molesting lil children**// I gave you a chance to spit your mother fucking rhyme ~ you musta been too scared or just waiting to bite some shit off mine// you could emboss me with your lyrics, but I still wouldn't be "impressed" ~ i drop this shit out my ass, penetrating your cracka khaki vest// fuck you now, and fuck you afterwards ~ i'm wiping you like my ass after shitting a big WHITE turd |
03-25-04, 09:58 PM | #5 | |
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Check-it,
Yo emcee P.T.( poetic-tendenceez) yur definately not the thug poet you pretend to be// Yur just another undercover brotha, with homosexual tendenceez // You are simply tempting me, to shred you into smithereens// Because you are using scapegoats like poetry to explain your sensitivity and insecurities// He said, “lets battle, but how about tomorrow” I figure that’s how long it took him to borrow// Some punches, similies, and wordplay, Just to get his ass beat on Thursday like it was his birthday// And I don’t wear jerseys, I just need a white tee// For some trees, my boy at da swap-meat, will swap me A air-brushed shirt that reads….R.I.P. emcee P.T.// Now type the hottest shit u got, and it’ll look like bluurrr B/c u speak insignificantly “Afterword”
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03-25-04, 10:00 PM | #6 | |
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yo u finally showed up, good business
i quik keyed once i seen u finally posted, but let the best "word" win! voters holla!
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03-25-04, 11:20 PM | #7 |
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you're the fucker who took so godamn long to respond to the first post bitch....quit your pussy crying.......peace
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03-26-04, 12:07 AM | #8 |
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IP: 811A 93F0
uppin this for some votes.....honest feedback will get return honest votes on your stuff....peace
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03-26-04, 12:11 AM | #9 | |
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poetic take this one cuz of his first line it makes me laugh tight shit dawg other dude uyou did alright
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03-26-04, 12:46 AM | #10 |
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uppin (2).....go ahead and finish this shit....this nigga got dropped hard...damn
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03-26-04, 12:48 AM | #11 | |
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IP: CE13 565F
yo thats a lame ass reason 4 that last vote
but phuck-it keep it movin uppin
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03-26-04, 08:30 AM | #12 |
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uppin (3)..........post a link and i'll hit it up with honest feedback....come on ya'll
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03-26-04, 10:59 AM | #13 |
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up this shit...bitches.......come on ya'll...some honest feedback and this kid'll be done....damn.....post a link and I'll hit it up with honest feedback
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03-26-04, 11:16 AM | #14 | |
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afterword ur bars were too short ur punches were too simple ur personal about how long he took was rubbish and u really didnt insult him enough also try to work on ur vocab a nd make ur bars longer
poetic ur verse was well structured and ure punches were witty and hit hard ur flow wasnt great though and u didnt use personals vote-poet return the favour with an honest vote vs KINGS http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127 vs rec-d http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940 vs touch to gold http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127
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03-26-04, 12:38 PM | #15 | |
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LOL HERES THE REA LINKS
vs KINGS http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117127 vs rec-d http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940 vs touch to gold http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127
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