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03-31-04, 04:10 AM | #1 | |||||
The Topical Juggernaut
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The Rose Pedal
IP: C531 1B40
Ten Thousand years from now, Earth as we know it is no Longer
Stronger, Men and their Power grew from the Calmer Hatred and Greed, the unfortunate Seed is what got Her Caught her, up in the mix of Wars and Slaughter Eventually Men in there Minds thought it Wise To build Armageddon in a Weapon...no longer hope for Compromise Now, at it's Height Mankind ruled the Planet Unaware its greatest enemy was Strong, Tough as Granite They couldn’t stand it, nearly Ended themselves in all the Panic Some created Warships, Other's Explore Ships to plan it Exactly what the Purpose was I truly don’t know My Opinion though, is one Man said this was so Another argued No, and after that? The guns did Blow. But no longer can we Dwell in the Mistakes of the Past for now we live on Planets where can't even grow Grass Surpass all the Ridges, false Bridges of Man You’ll come across the Visions and the Domes made of Sand Enter through the complex in the center of the Light You’ll see Creation Rebuilding, the Cradle of Life Once you're past the Sand Dunes and the Temples made of Metal You'll encounter something different, Unexpected.... A Rose Petal For even in this far and distant place we're forced to live, God remains with us, providing un-contending Gifts Reminding us that Simple things are Triple things we often want, Smaller things are always Greater then the Treasure we once Sought. Feedback Appreciated.
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Crhyme Sindicate The unexamined life is not worth living.
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03-31-04, 04:44 AM | #2 | ||||
....Trunks R 4 Bodies....
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IP: C1DA C961
Hot shit nigga........
one love...... |
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04-01-04, 08:09 PM | #3 | |||||
The Topical Juggernaut
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IP: C531 1B40
Uppin' for feedback
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Blow It - Topical -=Respect List=-
Crhyme Sindicate The unexamined life is not worth living.
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04-01-04, 09:12 PM | #4 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: C1DA C961
yo that shits deep...i dont even kno yo..hott shit tho
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to win this i aint gotta use everythin within me u couldnt blow a fuckin mic if u was monica lewinski A-1 Lyricists u eitha :ride: wit us -oR- >collide< wit us |
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04-02-04, 02:00 AM | #5 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6804 D41F
good drop ur hot
try to work on vocab a lil
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04-02-04, 02:25 AM | #6 | |||||
Suspended - Biting
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IP: A632 E809
Nice Drop Buddy
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04-03-04, 08:15 PM | #7 | |||||
..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 9DA6 C725
work on vocab but otha than that i was feelin it
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