10-15 linez
no crew votes all i ask

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some people that are mods on here

checkin in u do the same an ill spit

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yo im hear spit

ok check it

u claim to be the realist but wont even shoot the breeze/
its like im allergic to bitches when u around i be ready to sneeze/
i just wanna hand u a beatin that last a century/
so bad that it be in russel simmonz next documentary/
make me go undefeated for a year like a 1972 dolphin/
like the first murder in a scary movie its about to begin/
they say a man is made by what he goes threw/
better hope its true after this u gonna have to rebuild from mildue/
and please dont make me paralel park my gun in your throat/
the visual of it make u change the picture like a remote/
leavin u on the curb wit your heart in your lap/
punchlinez left u speachless so i guess its a wrap/

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ok here

E looch that was ok but me im untouchable/
im bout 2 eat u up like a mother fukin lunchable/
just promise me 1 thing, that u wont kill ur self after i click send/
cause wit a name like E looch i no u dont have friends/
lyin from the cealing dead and straped wit a note/
i made u suck my dick then i cut out ur throat/
while u were grovilin in pain i straped u wit a granade/
ur family didnt like u so when u died they had a parade/
ripin E looch is a uncontrollable addiction/
i'll nail u 2 a cross like jesuses crusafiction/
ur lines were predictable they messed wit my health/
i just ripped u so copy,print,and put it on ur shelf/

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

i liked relistdoggys shit better u both had good flows but when it came to the punches i like doggys more, i liked both intros they was hot but for the rest doggy won it...1 return da favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118359

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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Flow: Both flowed about the same to me....so i'll say its tie in this department

Vocab: Both had punches....realists' hit a little harder though. Neither had many multis, if any at all

Originality: Both original....

Structure: The structure was pretty equal....damn near the same

Overall Vote: Realistdoggy11....Mainly because his punches were harder

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get some vet votes on this uppin

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realistdoggy11 had some hard punches and came strong...


E looch that was ok but me im untouchable/
im bout 2 eat u up like a mother fukin lunchable/

nice opener ^^^^^^^^

Elooch had some hard hits and everything but overall realistdoggy had the better structure and better overall flow...


Vote: realistdoggy11

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ok uppin for some people that arent 13 and know punchlines to vote

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No Bull-Shit' .. Both Verses Succked A$$' .. But Let Me Hit This Shit Up With An Honest Vote!!!

Check Doggy's Lines:

E looch that was ok but me im untouchable/
im bout 2 eat u up like a mother fukin lunchable/

^An Alright Punch & Very Nice Opener!!! 9/10

while u were grovilin in pain i straped u wit a granade/
ur family didnt like u so when u died they had a parade/

^A Weak Punch' .. But An Alright Multie In There!!!

Vote: Doggy'

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damn these people are idiots on this site shit should be called hip hop and r&b battles

looch had a gangsta ass verse doggy shit was garbage an he slightly fed off what looch did i ait even votin no mo just puttin in my 2 fuckin centz looch u go to a diferent board an that shit rip him an many wayz stay up

just promise me 1 thing, that u wont kill ur self after i click send/
cause wit a name like E looch i no u dont have friends/

E looch that was ok but me im untouchable/
im bout 2 eat u up like a mother fukin lunchable/

ooooooo this 2 lines killed it. doggy had some nice punches and opener
good verse yo

8/10

looch - iight verse. finisher was weak as shit tho
your opener was you best line

leavin u on the curb wit your heart in your lap/
punchlinez left u speachless so i guess its a wrap/

vote - doggy

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This was an alright battle I guess, gotta give it to doggy tho for a better flow and better punches. Work on your flow and rymes Looch and you will get better.. alright battle ... vote goes to dogg

return the fav - http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119115

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TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE

they were both aight, but i gotta give it to elooch....his shit was more complex...he had rhymes that were funny...although both verses didn't flow that well....ya dig