A'ight, check in, then I'll spit first...

No less than 10 lines, no more than 25, a'ight?

All the standard shit applies...

Read it, critique it, vote it...

E

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...Mister E...

I don't need to talk shit about how I'm sick n' I'm the man/I'll just sit back and let the votes show how dope I am

...Bomb The Suburbs...Better Than Sex...BreathTaking Style...Breaking Through Stereotypes...Body, Thought & Soul...

MisterE v. Guyver4MK

Checkin in. Spit ya shit an PM me when ur done an I'll spit.
holla back

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Think carefully, homie, you get no do-over this time,
Flip a coin and decide, do you bite Em or Pac's lines?
Your bitin' someone, cuz your own rhymestyle got no endurance,
After this you're fucked like a 6 year old with AIDs and no insurance,
The only claps you get are when your tiny dick's burnin',
Now you know you're losin', you're uncomfortable, you're squirmin',
Never should've signed on to rhyme this time cuz you're mine,
After I flip ya, I'd take a picture, but child pornography is a crime,
You talk way too much shit, when you know you can't back it,
The only time you spit real shit is when your sick, coughin' and hackin',
So do us all a favor, sit the fuck down and strop trying to rap,
Cuz you been sent back, packin, like you're full of books and have straps...

E

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...Mister E...

I don't need to talk shit about how I'm sick n' I'm the man/I'll just sit back and let the votes show how dope I am

...Bomb The Suburbs...Better Than Sex...BreathTaking Style...Breaking Through Stereotypes...Body, Thought & Soul...

MisterE v. Guyver4MK

Okay, this may sound lame and retarded/
You musta jus crept outa CounTree's ass cos he farted/
I don't bite rhymes like a little nigga, I write 'em bitter/
So what if I used the beat from Hit 'em up and quitter/
How the fuck does that make me a biter you jus a cypher/
Try to hate on me cos u read one of my verses in front lines/
Whipe the white from ya lips an get your nickle or dime/
cos u caught syphilis & Cystitis from dick ridin people's rhymes/
You nothin to me, but a wannabe 'g' and I say that shit freely/
Cos I've won this battle, and the end sees u 6ft underneath me/

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-=It's a way of life!=-

Vote yall. I'm uppin in herre.

Holla Back People!

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god damn....Never should've signed on to rhyme this time cuz you're mine,
After I flip ya, I'd take a picture, but child pornography is a crime...thats all she wrote...show's over...too bad i can't use that for a vote...

alright...E....most of it was pretty solid....good punches...strong punches..punch..after punch..this is like oscar delahoya vs. some kid with downs syndrome...
So do us all a favor, sit the fuck down and strop trying to rap,
Cuz you been sent back, packin, like you're full of books and have straps

that was your worst line...i wasn't feelin it too much at all...maybe it's just how i read it...now onto you guy'


where the hell do i begin

oh...lets try here....Okay, this may sound lame and retarded/
You musta jus crept outa CounTree's ass cos he farted.....seriously...thats weak...no disrespect.....but you didn't bring your A game...as a matter of fact...you didn't bring any game at all...i don't wanna piss you off....but you need somethin to build off of...your punches were weak...no personals...no metas...nothin...your verse woulda been better if you said "i lose" and thats it.....anyways..good battle....????

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

guyver i wanna battle you...i'll set up....you can go first...

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

Vocab:MisterE
Flow:Tie
Structure:Tie
Creativity:MisterE
Opener:MisterE
Closer:MisterE

This battle was iight....couldve been better if ya actually took time to write sumden dat made sense ya know?

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what the hell...ok both elevation on both...but its coo still...anyways heres the thiing...

Flow...Both...no work needed
Punches....More from mister....hardly those that were grea...guy just repeated a punch thats alll....defending for your biting or shit in two lines gets annoying...say something new..

Personals....bla fuck that...
multis...none to see here...
overall=Mister...BARELY though...Im not a textee but i know what im talking about here...ok done..

hit up my audio battle please..

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119124

aight...i'll vote on this if you guys vote on mine

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119158

yo this was a pretty one sided battle....

mr e took everything

flow
direction
humor
creativity
this kid verse was sick from the start

Think carefully, homie, you get no do-over this time,
Flip a coin and decide, do you bite Em or Pac's lines?
straight till the end

You talk way too much shit, when you know you can't back it,
The only time you spit real shit is when your sick, coughin' and hackin',
vote mr e