no d/r votes
15-25 lines max
3-0 equals KO
5 else wise
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check in
and then i will flow

battle due by 3 p.m.
votes due by friday.

i'm not ready yet..i'm battlin like hella freaken ppl right now..i'll be ready in like 45 minutes

okay i will be waiting im sittin here in TRIGONOMETRY BORED AS A BITCH RIGHT NOW.. LEARNING.(we get laptops the entire school does)

dawg.......... I'm ready now alright...just spit first

im at *no lost 4 rhymes* each time i slay mimes several ,in each one of my lines/
im in school,doin trig with signs like sine the way i mulltiply my lines i should divide by cosine/
im *blessed* with great words,sweet,sertainly absurd,i must be absolutely divine/(cookies)
i'll rally bloods and crips niggas to Cali,get you merked in a back alley/
nimbus,bamboozled,get ya brain out the sky,cuz i might catch u cloudy/
it's obvious this nigga gettin dick multiple ways,u singin like ja rule...with no more rainy days/
i'll douse u in petroleum set your anatomy to blaze,have you engulfed in fiery haze/
just call me tourney man(tourneyment) cuz after a few rounds ,i get you eliminated/
like robert downy meets the twin towers,cant stand tall against me until u get rehabilitated/(drugs robert downy,twin towers were standing tall)
im suffocate your rhyme deprive it of any life,it gets no ventilation/
ill circumcise ya *Clique* like afghani's ritual womens mutilation/
no hesistation,when i *cum* at you,like i was on pussy deprivation/(cum hard and alot)
i'll beat rhymes head in, over and over again,like a preteen who recently discovered masturbation/
THERE'S NO NEGOTIATIONS,I STAY ONE-SIDED IN BATTLES,LIKE U WAS Iraq and I WAS UNITED NATIONS/
I *daily spit C,bally's for ya*,i'll get like magellan and travel all the way to *daly city,cali forn ia*/ (the ones in the starst in last bars rhymes)

When i spit its no joke...this heat will leave vc broke dry and cracked with no flow//
and if i must say your entire style is incomplete like winter wear with no coat//
I don't come close to losers, so I prefer you keep your distance//
you need assistance, better start praying and hope that Jesus listens//
Your so whack you ask dykes to sit on your lap//
and you write as good as a broken typewriter used by a guy on crack//
I dont give a fuck who votes, my words pierce through throats//
I'll let you type three verse's and still take you out in two quotes//
Facial hair? We all know thats something you wont be getting soon//
So fuck a close shave cause the only thing im trimming down is your squads platoon//

So, You think your rhymes is tight nigga Heck No, Loose It//
Your Sounds is Repetitive
Can somebody please rename this kid "Techno Music"//
Your whack, Dont show me what this Hoar can do//
Because I've seen uncle Festa blow up more than you//
You - Whack - Fuck..open ya eyes and read the signs//
This here is called Rap Search Please leave the site//
Your going home injured, Whether Men will job ya twice.//
Either by Smut Pedlars, Tame One, Cage, Or Copywrite!//
Im the iLLest with Victims, I Use a Stopwatch And Guns//
Get ta thinkin,while Danna screams at the top of his lungs/
Its your death, What ya wanna do? Choose To Run?//
Yea, it's true, I have no lost for my ryhmes//
cuz my rhymes come from my mind//
Unlike this guy that gets his rhymes from a site and plagerize//

lets get em votes in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well my vote
punches: close close but it goes2: nolost
flow: no lost

VC you did good probably 7 out of ten u coukd dobetter
no lost: probably 8.5 out of 10
you both could do better
my vote nolost

thanx dawg

this was a really close one
i kno u both got more in u but my vote goes to nolost
it was a really close one but i was feelin no lost n' his punchlines n' flow
vote:nolost

thanx dawg

this was a good battle
flow:NoLost
Punches:NoLost
Structure:NoLost
Originality:Vc

Both overall good performances
NoLost i give an 8 out of 10.
Vc i give a 7 out of 10.

Playas, vote on some of these battles so i can free up a spot
franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 0-1 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 0-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335

yo hot shyt
VC dude u got lyrics( i heard from u b4), but i dont think battles are yur strong point.
no lie i have the same problem making the adjustments b/c im truly a lyricist opposed to a battle, or gangsta emcee
maybe try concentrating some of yur lines and to make them more compact to enhance the impact, and also consentrate on tur opponent more

no lost u did yo thang a lil bit and i give u the win for yur consistent punchlines and similies. also structure and rhyme scheme were in tact

fav line: "I don't come close to losers, so I prefer you keep your distance//
you need assistance, better start praying and hope that Jesus listens//"

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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst"

bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1)

Help me close these/ and I will help U
an EYE 4 an EYE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271

i just need one more vote